Manfred summarized the issues with readability pretty well, but the issue is slightly more complicated. There were also sections in the theology bit especially where it felt like there were a lot of unstated premises.
You disagree with the "mostly"? Maybe you're thinking of the majority—I was thinking of the mode. Do you agree that the mode of theology is Christian, given some informal, intuitive measure?
In that case, I'm not sure, and I suspect that any intuition is going to be drastically impacted by availibility bias. For example, I know intellectually that there's a lot of Hindu theology out there, but my rough intuition for how much is out there for different groups is wildly in favor of the Abrahamic religions and then a little bit to Buddhism and that only because I took an intro Buddhism class in college. I suspect that any sort of judgment about such a mode is more a statement about what religions one has been exposed to more than anything else.
Overall, I think this would have been much better received if it had not made any mention of theology at all and had just been presented with just the second half as a discussion of variants of the Zoo/Planetarium hypotheses.
There were also sections in the theology bit especially where it felt like there were a lot of unstated premises.
I didn't flag them? Usually I'll flag assumptions, and then you can choose to take them on or not. If I'm not flagging them then they shouldn't be used further down in the post. Were they? Sorry if I'm unjustifiably crowdsourcing.
Here.
Long story short, it's an attempt to justify the planetarium hypothesis as a solution to the Fermi paradox. The first half is a discussion of how it and things like it are relevant to the intended purview of the blog, and the second half is the meat of the post. You'll probably want to just eat the meat, which I think is relevant to the interests of many LessWrong folk.
The blog is Computational Theology. It's new. I'll be the primary poster, but others are sought. I'll likely introduce the blog and more completely describe it in its own discussion post when more posts are up, hopefully including a few from people besides me, and when the archive will give a more informative indication of what to expect from the blog. Despite theism's suspect reputation here at LessWrong I suspect many of the future posts will be of interest to this audience anyway, especially for those of you who take interest in discussion of the singularity. The blog will even occasionally touch on rationality proper. So you might want to store the fact of the blog's existence somewhere deep in the back of your head. A link to the blog's main page can be found on my LessWrong user page if you forget the url.
I'd appreciate it if comments about the substance of the post were made on the blog post itself, but if you want to discuss the content here on LessWrong then that's okay too. Any meta-level comments about presentation, typos, or the post's relevance to LessWrong, should probably be put as comments on this discussion post. Thanks all!