Linking to a bunch of posts is going to be TLDR - that's asking for way too much investment at that stage.
Hm. When I read the internet, I tend to click on links that look interesting. The idea of my about page rewrite was to provide a bunch of links and try to make them seem interesting, so that people reading the about page would click on at least a few. I don't see this as asking for "investment".
I'm glad you're excited about this project, but I skimmed over your posts and it looks like they're long on philosophizing and short on string substitutions. How about you write the about page the way you'd like to see it, and we either create a poll or do an A/B test to figure out which version is better?
Also, based on what you've describe of your experience finding Less Wrong, it sounds as though you had an unusually intense reaction to finding it. So it seems possible that if you generalize from your example, you'll do a good job of targeting people whose brains are wired like yours, but a poor job of targeting "typical" readers.
It occurred to me that maybe you missed the fact that I've already done rewrites. I'd love to hear specific suggestions, e.g. "Instead of [paragraph X], write [paragraph Y]". (Of course, you can also rewrite everything if you want. Either would be much easier for me to incorporate changes from than your current "wish list" approach. If you don't have time to do either, I'll probably skim over your wish list and incorporate whatever seems the most important.)
There's a science to getting people to click on links. I am sorry to say this to a person who obviously cares very much about this, but the reason I didn't provide you "string substitutions" for your links is because that's going about things the wrong way. Long story short, on the internet, people want cool stuff now. You can't hide cool stuff behind a link, and you can't rename the link to turn the link itself into cool stuff. You have to take cool stuff and put it in their face. One has to pay attention to "bounce rate". The bo...
Proposed rewrites can be found here. Please suggest specific improvements in the comments!
Although long-time Less Wrong users don't pay much attention to the home page, about page, and FAQ, I suspect new users pay lots of attention to them. A few times, elsewhere on the internet, I've seen people describe their impression of Less Wrong that seemed primarily gleaned from these pages--they made generalizations about Less Wrong that didn't seem true to me, but might appear to be true if all one did was read the about page and FAQ.
The about page, in particular, is called out to every new visitor. Try visiting Less Wrong in incognito mode or private browsing (i.e. without your current cookies) to see what I'm referring to.
But the current set of "newcomer pages" isn't very good, in my opinion:
I certainly don't claim to speak for all Less Wrong users. If you have any thoughts, please comment here, send me a private message, or log in to the wiki and edit the candidate pages directly.
I'm especially interested in getting feedback on the FAQ, because I took the liberty of codifying some social norms that were previously implicit: see the section Site Etiquette and Social Norms, especially the bits about Discussion vs Main, politics, and "if you never get voted down, you're not posting enough".
If you think I codified the social norms incorrectly, or you've been thinking they really should be different, please comment! The FAQ seems like a good way to broadcast preferred norms, so I suspect this is an ideal thread to discuss them.
If you've got a suggested change that's nontrivial, I encourage you to create a poll for it here using comments as poll options or HonoreDB's system.
(Previous discussion.)