Vaniver comments on How To Have Things Correctly - Less Wrong

57 Post author: Alicorn 17 October 2012 06:10AM

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Comment author: Alicorn 17 October 2012 08:48:02PM 0 points [-]

Would it help if I added an ellipsis between "having things" and "have the wrong things"?

Comment author: Vaniver 17 October 2012 08:55:45PM 0 points [-]

I would go with "having things either have the wrong things or have them incorrectly." Possibly keep the comma to match speech patterns / make it slightly clearer, though I think it looks better without it.