JGWeissman comments on The Frontal Syndrome - Less Wrong

18 Post author: Annoyance 01 June 2009 04:10PM

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Comment author: JGWeissman 01 June 2009 07:07:01PM 14 points [-]

You seem to have a poor model of other people's minds that leads you to be too quick to dismiss others as morons. By itself, this is understandable, as understanding how other people think can be hard. But you stubbornly refuse all help to improve your model, and reject advise on how to communicate your points better.

This is unfortunate because your article is well written and introduces an interesting question. So it would be good to support with background sources. Presumably you have references where you learned about the examples you give, it should not be hard to actually cite them, to give your readers the benefits of your research. This would give your argument more credibility, and allow to reach a wide audience, as you provide an overview that is easily approachable by those with casual interest, and technical references would satisfy those who want to dig deeper. And, of course, citations would distinguish your article from something that someone just made up.

The problem with expecting readers to use Google is that they may find bad or irrelevant references. You should choose and present the reference that best supports your points, and not make your readers wonder if your point is really unsupported or if they just have not found the right support yet.