Leonhart comments on How to Write Deep Characters - Less Wrong

45 Post author: Eliezer_Yudkowsky 16 June 2013 02:10AM

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Comment author: Leonhart 21 June 2013 10:00:50AM 0 points [-]

Not sure I follow. Why is the conflict here not "Man vs. Thirst"? Just because we are only made aware of the conflict as it ends, doesn't mean it wasn't happening in-universe during the first three panels.