linkhyrule5 comments on Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 20, chapter 90 - Less Wrong

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Comment author: loserthree 02 July 2013 03:27:32AM 2 points [-]

It'd been one of the spells he and Hermione had experimented on, a lifetime ago, so he was able to control it precisely, though it had taken a lot of power to affect that much mass. Hermione's body should now be at almost exactly five degrees Celsius.

I feel like this comes off as a bit of an ass pull. It's the suspicious specificity that does it, I think.

It would be easy to prevent that feeling, if you care to and if it's not just me, with a throwaway line in an earlier chapter.

Comment author: linkhyrule5 02 July 2013 03:48:23AM 5 points [-]

Frigideiro was mentioned, though - when he tests his "dark side," his dark side isn't any more powerful with magic.

Comment author: loserthree 02 July 2013 03:58:25AM 1 point [-]

Frigideiro was mentioned, though - when he tests his "dark side," his dark side isn't any more powerful with magic.

Yeah, but not precision. That's why it's just feel like a bit of an ass pull -- a "butt snag"? -- and why is the way it's so specific is kind of what sets the alarm off for me.