linkhyrule5 comments on Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 20, chapter 90 - Less Wrong
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I feel like this comes off as a bit of an ass pull. It's the suspicious specificity that does it, I think.
It would be easy to prevent that feeling, if you care to and if it's not just me, with a throwaway line in an earlier chapter.
Frigideiro was mentioned, though - when he tests his "dark side," his dark side isn't any more powerful with magic.
Yeah, but not precision. That's why it's just feel like a bit of an ass pull -- a "butt snag"? -- and why is the way it's so specific is kind of what sets the alarm off for me.