My impression of Luminosity, after reading it and before reading Radiance, was that it was essentially depicting the usefulness of luminosity more of less entirely by showing vampire-Bella completely losing her luminosity techniques/attitudes. To what degree did you intend this? Do you see it as accurate?
Also what do you think of Syzygy, seven years down the line? (Me(highschool) quite liked it. Me(2014) was very surprised to discover that it was written by someone I encountered again elsewhere.)
I did not intend that interpetation, and have been repeatedly surprised to find people espousing it. There is a reduction in Luminosity's didacticism over the course of the book as I got caught up in the plot, and it's possible it happens to undergo a particularly noticeable drop around when Bella turns which people are reading this way. However, I didn't intend to show Bella's various errors as being consequences of any abandonment of her interior luminosity, however much less narration I spent on it. She has plenty of other personality flaws and resou...
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