tegid comments on How to write an academic paper, according to me - Less Wrong

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Comment author: tegid 16 October 2014 06:35:43AM 9 points [-]

Excellent advice, both in the post and in the comments. I only wanted to add that at least some readers (that I guess belong somewhere in between the skimmer and full reader categories) read the figure captions (and look at the figures, obviously) besides reading introduction and/or conclusions, as a way to see directly, but rapidly, the main results of the paper and how they are demonstrated. This obviously depends on the field, and I can only know for sure that it happens in my own field(s), stochastic processes/modelling of biological processes/other related fields.

I personally also do it for biology papers, because I do not trust the conclusions, but I'm not sure biologists do this.

Comment author: JenniferRM 16 October 2014 07:14:55AM 8 points [-]

I was also a bit surprised by Stuart's lack of emphasis on figures. Having worked in 2 biology labs, I think most of the people I know who read or write a lot of papers agree that the figures are the most important thing to "read" first and the first thing to "write". When you have lots of data in a table (or ten), that is where the truth is, but it will tend to be very hard to interpret without scatterplots, error bars, tree diagrams, color coding, maps, and suchlike things.

One of the interesting things about the "figure first" advice is that an author (here I agree with Stuart) should write the first draft of a text starting with the details and building to the summary, but this is the opposite of the order in which an efficient reader should approach the same text. But next to the text is the figures, and here the order in which they are approached is probably the same. Look at them first, construct them first.

Maybe, the abstract is more important for online paywall considerations, like if it is all that many readers can get, and the abstract has to communicate that they should work to find the paper somewhere else? But if I'm reading a paper copy of Science or Nature then I go to the abstracts after the figures, personally. And even online, when I wanted to know whether the natural reservoir of Ebola had been found, the figure was the key thing and I found it via image search.

Now that I think of it... in my last startup, one of the founders would sometimes post to a blog for marketing purposes, and he made sure every single post had an image, because he had discovered by looking at the analytics that image searches that match "alt text" can pull in organic eyeballs like crazy.

Comment author: Stuart_Armstrong 16 October 2014 08:44:41AM 3 points [-]

Interesting. It really seems to be field thing - neither the maths nor the philosophy I did were much into figures.

Comment author: Sean_o_h 16 October 2014 10:11:08AM *  7 points [-]

I think our field of philosophy, and that of xrisk, could very much benefit from more/better figures, but this might be the biologist in me speaking. Look at how often Nick Bostrom's (really quite simplistic) xrisk "scope versus intensity" graph is used/reproduced.

Comment author: owencb 17 October 2014 11:20:53AM 4 points [-]

Several of my favourite mathematics papers have excellent diagrams.

Comment author: Stuart_Armstrong 17 October 2014 01:18:58PM 2 points [-]

And some of my best friends use diagrams... but...