MarkusRamikin comments on Breaking the vicious cycle - Less Wrong

43 Post author: XiXiDu 23 November 2014 06:25PM

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Comment author: MarkusRamikin 25 November 2014 02:25:21PM *  6 points [-]

selectively collecting all of his quotes one-sidedly

This phrasing feels a little clumsy/rushed to me: "selectively" + "onesidedly" is redundant, and "collecting all of" contradicts "selectively". Perhaps worth improving if it's to be copypasted over a whole bunch of posts. How about "cherry-picking his quotes" or something?

Disclaimer: foreign speaker here.