The first sentence read like sound logic to me (personally, not speaking for other guys), but I couldn't really figure what the hell she wants from my life from all the rest.
As far as I can tell, that quote is one sentence, so I'm not sure how you're dividing it up.
"For example: most men have inner conflicts of values;"
This part. It's an issue I can solve quite easily, but at the same time it feels like the bar is being set lower, rather than higher, and that's what irks me.
Another month, another rationality quotes thread. The rules are: