Nanashi comments on Rationality is about pattern recognition, not reasoning - Less Wrong
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I'd be glad to offer what help I can. Based on other posts of yours, I would definitely practice brevity. This post is over 1000 words long and easily could be condensed to 250 or less.
Per our email exchange, here is the condensed version that uses only your original writing:
Notes:
While I agree that there's value to being able to state the summary of the viewpoint, I can't help but feel that brevity is the wrong approach to take to this subject in particular. If the point is that effective people reason by examples and seeing patterns rather than by manipulating logical objects and functions, then removing the examples and patterns to just leave logical objects and functions is betraying the point!
Somewhat more generally, yes, there is value in telling people things, but they need to be explained if you want to communicate with people that don't already understand them.
I definitely agree that you shouldn't be so brief as to not get your point across, I think the level of brevity depends on what your goal is. In this case, he's asking for help. It isn't until 1,500 words in that the two most important questions: "What does he want?" and "Why should I help him?" are answered.
(Besides, he specifically wanted help in communicating things succinctly.)
The post reminded me of The creative mind by Margaret Bowden; her examples, in particular Kekule seeing the benzene ring, seem relevant here. (Although the book definitely could be shorter:)
Here is the even-further edited version, condensed to 150 words.
You'll note it very quickly gets to the three main points:
Let me know if I summarized any part of your thoughts incorrectly.
Thanks very much, both for the shorted version and for the notes. I added the shorted version at the top of my post.
Not a problem at all. What you're talking about is something I believe in, so I'm glad to help.
I do not think the entire post was too long, but I do think reading the short version first was helpful. It's sort of like reading an abstract before diving into a journal article. If nothing else, it helps people who are uninterested save some time.
I'm not convinced this is true, but regardless, what about people who neither agree nor disagree? To a large extent, explaining why your viewpoint is right is exactly the same thing as explaining in detail what your viewpoint is.