Clarity comments on Reason Poetry: f(me.0) - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Clarity 22 October 2015 12:50:03PM *  -1 points [-]

No, poetry doesn't get a good reception - even in quote threads...

I suppose this can be our poetry thread. Why not? It'll contain it for those who can't handle our poetry skilz.

Dominion of fear

  • There is so much I want to say
  • But I find it so difficult to speak freely
  • For Fear of being put down
  • So I focus on looking at fears
  • Confronting my fears
  • Facing my fear
  • Dominating my fears
  • Fearing nothing when I speak
  • As if nothing around me is relevant
  • As if nothing can subjugate me to their will
  • Taking offence or otherwise
  • And I'm caught up in this world
  • As if the other person isn't there
  • As if their considerations are irrelevant
  • As if the pain of what I say dosen't hurt them
  • And doesn't bring the fear into them
  • And if they do dominate that fear
  • It matters not
  • For we've dominated ourselves
  • Not knowing we've dominated one another

Inspired by Malcolm X, the hope that expressing these insights will be a therapeutic supplement to downtimes in my concentration & my own upbringing and ongoing recovery from PTSD.

It sounds terrible to me honestly, but I hope being brave enough to brave it might encourage others to do the same - permission to make bad art! It's certainly helped me feel better writing this.