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Comment author: MrHen 29 May 2009 12:39:31AM 1 point [-]

Endings in general are worth more than their weight in paper, because they either give the story's journey a destination, or they make the entire story pointless.

Hmm. I guess I look for different things in books than you do. I like the journey of the story. I really do not care too much about where the journey ends or starts. I like the middle. If the middle is crap in a book I will never, ever read it again. I can endure a bad beginning or a mediocre ending, but if the middle is a desert I have a hard time liking the book. If 70% "blah" leads into 30% "wow", why did I bother with the first 70%? Give me a summary of the 70% and let me read the good parts.

I suppose some of this sentiment comes from the fact that there is no good reason for any part of any book to be blah. 70% bad and 30% good is strictly worse than 70% good. There are books that exist where the entire thing is worth reading and I only have so much reading time.

Another guess at the source of this sentiment is that I actually enjoy the writing. I like good writing as much as I like a good story. I enjoy books that are about nothing in particular and have no great story to tell if they are written well. 70% bad writing is not worth 30% good story.

Of course, as I mentioned, I am not talking directly about Twilight since I have not read more than a few sentences.

The last book (slightly more than 25%; it's the longest of the four), in this case, provides a well-worth-the-wait payoff for the slow pacing of the first three.

I am not really talking about pace. I like slow pace if it fits.

Comment author: dclayh 29 May 2009 05:51:48PM 2 points [-]

I think people like Alicorn who enjoy books for story and plot, become annoyed at unsatisfying endings, etc., generally tend to group themselves into what's called "genre" fiction (particularly SF/F, although SF has the "cool ideas" component also), while people like you who are more attracted to good prose style and what you might call "small-scale enjoyability" tend to group into "classic" fiction.

I have this debate ("what makes a book good?") with my friends frequently, since they're mostly in Alicorn's camp and over the last decade I've drifted steadily into yours.

Comment author: MrHen 29 May 2009 06:25:06PM 0 points [-]

I agree.

I really do not think there is anything inherent in any genre that prevents good writing or good stories. I like cool ideas for stories but get really annoyed when the writing is poor. I would claim I like the story but dislike the writing.

I have this debate ("what makes a book good?") with my friends frequently, since they're mostly in Alicorn's camp and over the last decade I've drifted steadily into yours.

My camp is one where bad writing trumps a good story. A bad story pushes me toward disliking a book with good writing but with a much lesser force.

My justification for this is that it is really easy to come up with a good story and really hard to write well.

For comparison, good stories hold much more weight in other mediums. Movies, in particular, have to have a good story or I will probably not watch it again.

Comment author: dclayh 29 May 2009 06:34:58PM *  0 points [-]

Personally I wouldn't go so far as to say writing "trumps" story, just that they both have significant weight.

My justification for this is that it is really easy to come up with a good story and really hard to write well.

My justification is simply that good writing should be good through its entire power spectrum, from individual word choice, to a well-crafted sentence, to an engaging scene, to a meaningful overarching plot. Having one component that's excellent doesn't justify poor performance in others; everything weighs in together. (Of course, there are some authors (Dan Brown springs to mind) whose prose style is just so awful that I can't make it through even a single page, so I have no chance of appreciating the plot.)

Comment author: Alicorn 29 May 2009 01:08:47AM 0 points [-]

I suppose I'm probably unique in my approach to stories because I loathe surprises (to the point where I'd rather get nothing at all on my birthday than anticipate getting something but not know what). So I tend to like re-reading more than reading for the first time, since I know what to expect. This causes me to place a high importance on endings, because if what I expect while re-reading a book (or reading it for the first time, if I've found a synopsis on the Internet) is a lousy ending, I won't enjoy the rest of it much.

Comment author: MrHen 29 May 2009 04:10:51PM 0 points [-]

I suppose I'm probably unique in my approach to stories [...]

Well, probably not unique, but certainly nowhere near how I approach them. As such, I doubt that you or I could ever recommend a book to each other with any useful accuracy. Good to know, I guess, if Less Wrong ever turns into a book club?