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Alicorn comments on Luminosity (Twilight Fanfic) Discussion Thread 3 - Less Wrong Discussion

10 Post author: Alicorn 30 December 2010 02:37PM

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Comment author: Alicorn 09 February 2011 06:36:19PM 1 point [-]

Aha. I hallucinated writing a clause in the paragraph where Jake wakes up indicating that Elspeth closed her phone to have her hands free to deal with him, but it isn't actually there. Editing it in now. Thanks.