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Manfred comments on Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 7 - Less Wrong Discussion

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Comment author: Manfred 30 January 2011 01:08:14PM 5 points [-]

I agree that semicolons are awesome, and one would probably be the best choice for sentence two.

Comment author: free_rip 31 January 2011 08:13:57AM 0 points [-]

Both colons and semi-colons are known to break the flow of writing. Dashes generally flow better than semi-colons. This is something I've found after writing many pieces (often with lots of semi-colons, which my natural style has a lot of) on a peer review writing-site and having reviewers tell me - 'x sentence doesn't flow well' for basically every sentence with a semi-colon.

They work better in non-fic writing, where the flow can be more formal.

Comment author: syllogism 07 February 2011 11:17:59AM 1 point [-]

A substantial disadvantage of semi-colons is simply that they're rare. If a small but significant portion of your readers don't read them as you intend you're better off finding another way.

It's a pity though, because if I were writing for perfect clones of me, they'd often be the best choice.

Comment author: TobyBartels 08 February 2011 12:24:56AM 1 point [-]

I use semicolons a lot more when writing on Less Wrong (and other places where intelligence is high) than on many other places.