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CharlesR comments on Rationalist approach to developing Writing skills - Less Wrong Discussion

6 Post author: FiftyTwo 14 July 2011 03:00PM

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Comment author: CharlesR 14 July 2011 08:00:46PM *  0 points [-]

Strunk and White isn't self help. It's a style manual.

Comment author: FiftyTwo 14 July 2011 08:04:11PM 0 points [-]

Apologies for the ambiguity, I meant it may have similar issues in not basing its reccomendations on hard data about what the majority of people find useful

Comment author: CharlesR 14 July 2011 09:06:24PM *  1 point [-]

It's very hard to talk generally, even about fiction. But if you send the same manuscript to ten different editors, the same problems come up again and again. Try not to use adverbs. Watch point-of-view. Don't use too much (or too little) description. Watch pacing. Avoid the passive voice. Show, don't tell. Use said. Etc.