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Raemon comments on Beyond the Reach of God, Abridged for Spoken Word - Less Wrong Discussion

10 Post author: Raemon 06 December 2011 06:49PM

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Comment author: Raemon 07 December 2011 07:58:43AM 2 points [-]

After practicing reading a few times, I decided that some sections really need extra verbage to retain their power. Added some things back in.

I also think I may need to adjust the tone slightly, to match the style of speech that I would normally use when saying something that I'm truly passionate about. Right now, when I read it, it's obvious that I'm reading from a script instead of speaking from the heart.