This is entirely redundant with your first post. Also, you have provided absolutely no information about the texts in question; this makes it difficult to tell whether it's worth my time to provide feedback. It would be very helpful if you posted an excerpt or a summary or something.
Agree with all this. An alternative solution is for Diego to publish his current draft to a Google doc that everyone can see, and allow commentary here.
Hi, I'm going to publish soon here a study of CEV composed of two texts "On What is a Self" and "Troubles with CEV" Would you like to give feedback prior to publication?
If so, please provide your e-mail address and I will send you the text.
Merry Newtonmas