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Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 12

5 Post author: Xachariah 25 March 2012 11:01AM

The new thread, discussion 13, is here.

 

This is a new thread to discuss Eliezer Yudkowsky's Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality and anything related to it. With three chapters recently the previous thread has very quickly reached 1000 comments. The latest chapter as of 25th March 2012 is Ch 80.

There is now a site dedicated to the story at hpmor.com, which is now the place to go to find the authors notes and all sorts of other goodies. AdeleneDawner has kept an archive of Author's Notes. (This goes up to the notes for chapter 76, and is now not updating. The authors notes from chapter 77 onwards are on hpmor.com.)


The first 5 discussion threads are on the main page under the harry_potter tag.  Threads 6 and on (including this one) are in the discussion section using its separate tag system.  Also: one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven.

As a reminder, it's often useful to start your comment by indicating which chapter you are commenting on.

Spoiler Warning:  this thread is full of spoilers.  With few exceptions, spoilers for MOR and canon are fair game to post, without warning or rot13.  More specifically:

You do not need to rot13 anything about HP:MoR or the original Harry Potter series unless you are posting insider information from Eliezer Yudkowsky which is not supposed to be publicly available (which includes public statements by Eliezer that have been retracted).

If there is evidence for X in MOR and/or canon then it's fine to post about X without rot13, even if you also have heard privately from Eliezer that X is true. But you should not post that "Eliezer said X is true" unless you use rot13.

 

Comments (692)

Comment author: Normal_Anomaly 28 March 2012 01:34:11PM *  1 point [-]

Bunch of reactions to the new chapter:
I sort-of guessed the solution! * squee * I don't usually like to speculate on what's going to happen in works of fiction, because if I'm wrong I'm embarassed and if I'm right it lessons the surprise. But I had fun speculating and the chapter still had me on the edge of my seat with the tennis match of negotiations. Professor McGonagall is so damn awesome.
The bit with the dementor was hilarious, but I don't really understand this section:

The Dementors are Death, and the Patronus Charm works by thinking about happy thoughts instead of Death.

If Harry's theory was correct, that one sentence would be all it took to pop the Aurors' Patronus Charms like a soap bubble, and ensure that nobody within reach of his voice could cast another one.

Why, even if Harry's theory was true, would the animal patronuses not work once people know the truth? Even when you know death is bad, you can still think about other things.

Comment author: roystgnr 28 March 2012 07:56:32PM 4 points [-]

Suppose I offer to give you a dollar unless you think of how many letters are in the word "cat".

Could you do it?

Now replace "give you a dollar" with "not kill you horribly" and replace "how many letters..." with "your own inevitable mortality". The stakes are even higher and it's effectively the same task, but the problem sounds even harder...

(of course, that may just be my own mind projection fallacy at work. Did anyone make it to the end of this comment without thinking of the number "three"?)

Comment author: TobyBartels 01 April 2012 05:38:44PM 1 point [-]

I thought about the word ‘cat’ and thought about the individual letters but didn't consciously count them before I forced my attention away. On the other hand, I rarely consciously count numbers that low, so arguably I was thinking of the number as soon as I thought about the triplet of letters. I'm confident that I didn't subvocalise the word ‘three’ (or otherwise imagine any symbolic representation of the number) until I began reading your last paragraph and your quotation of that word came into my consciousness.

Comment author: Desrtopa 30 March 2012 03:29:25PM 1 point [-]

Suppose I offer to give you a dollar unless you think of how many letters are in the word "cat".

Could you do it?

I'm pretty sure I could; I've never tried it with actual money on the line before, but I can not think about elephants when challenged to. Some people are better at exerting control over the direction of their conscious thoughts than others.

Comment author: Danylo 28 March 2012 05:38:15PM 0 points [-]

His theory is that they wouldn't work. So, if his theory is true, it's true. Not sure how else to explain it.

Comment author: buybuydandavis 28 March 2012 06:33:54AM 6 points [-]

Isn't it about time Harry taught Hermione Patronus 2.0?

Comment author: buybuydandavis 28 March 2012 06:19:23AM 10 points [-]

First - YAY! I really do love this book.

Second, the link to part 13 isn't working.

Third, are we going to get a George Bailey scene of people helping to pay off the debt? He did only save them all from the Dark Lord. I know it's not quite as important as helping people to get mortgages, but it should count for something. If nothing else, there's got to be enough people with money out there who wouldn't want the Boy Who Lived to be in debt to the leader of the Death Eaters just as a political matter. And after his show of power against the Dementor, there should be a few people who would consider doing him a favor an extremely wise investment.

Comment author: smk 28 March 2012 05:30:37AM *  2 points [-]

It's interesting that in Ch 81 Lucius (acted like he) didn't know that Harry can cast a Patronus.

In Ch 79, Dumbledore suggested:

Harry... whatever you have done with Draco, you must assume that Lucius Malfoy will soon know of it."

Harry's head sank into his hands. "He'll give Draco Veritaserum."

But apparently Lucius decided to let Draco keep some privacy.
Or he just hasn't gotten around to fully questioning him under veritaserum yet.
Or he's pretending that he doesn't know that Harry has a Patronus.
Or someone obliviated Draco of this information before Draco was returned to his father.
Or Draco is secretly an occlumens and he just pretended to let the veritaserum work on him.

EDIT: Never mind, there's a comment in the new thread about it.

Comment author: Rejoyce 28 March 2012 04:43:52AM *  12 points [-]

In retrospect, our guesswork was a lot messier than it should have been.

Chapter 25:

One set of problem-solving groups had been given the instruction "Do not propose solutions until the problem has been discussed as thoroughly as possible without suggesting any."

The other set of problem-solving groups had been given no instructions. And those people had done the natural thing, and reacted to the presence of a problem by proposing solutions. And people had gotten attached to those solutions, and started fighting about them, and arguing about the relative importance of freedom versus efficiency and so on.

and

Starting out by looking for solutions was taking things entirely out of order. Like starting a meal with dessert, only bad.

While Less Wrong discussants are usually prone to less fighting and arguing than the norm, they are not prone to being inefficient.

What we should have done was forbade any and all solutions until two days after the chapter was released. We had five full days to guess, we didn't need to have all our solutions down the first twenty-four hours. Not to mention that instead of simpler solutions, we continued to look for answers more complex than the ones already proposed after we thought we already cleared the low-hanging fruit.

While some people have made an attempt to analyze first, listing everything in the room, things that only Harry knows, et cetera, the majority of us just proposed solutions right away. This was probably not what Mr. Yudkowsky wanted.

Word of God:

One thing I did notice was that many readers (a) neglected simple solutions in favor of complex ones, (b) neglected obvious solutions in favor of nonobvious ones, and (c) suggested that the correct hints had been put there for deliberately deceptive purposes.

...which in my mind I parsed as keep it simple, stupid, and you all were looking in the wrong direction and why the hell are you all proposing one preposterous idea after another, are you trying to look intelligent or something.

My only conclusion after reading that was that if we drew a map first we probably would of found the more probable solutions a lot quicker. Also reading through 1.5k+ comments full of solutions was headache-inducing.

Comment author: Viliam_Bur 31 March 2012 06:14:02PM 1 point [-]

One thing I did notice was that many readers (a) neglected simple solutions in favor of complex ones, (b) neglected obvious solutions in favor of nonobvious ones, and (c) suggested that the correct hints had been put there for deliberately deceptive purposes.

That's a version of publication bias. If a solution is very simple and if the hints are interpreted in the most obvious ways, then it seems like not worth publishing. :D

Comment author: AspiringKnitter 28 March 2012 07:21:38AM 3 points [-]

Personally, I thought the problem through and did, literally, draw a map of the room with its people and creatures, before coming on here, and yet I will own up to having not come up with anything at all and not even figured out which of the solutions proposed by others seemed most plausible.

Comment author: drnickbone 28 March 2012 11:27:37PM *  2 points [-]

Couple of things:

  1. The clue about seeing the Wizengamot as PCs rather than wallpaper rather fizzled out. They still look a lot like wallpaper, and only Lucius and Dumbledore look like PCs. Though Dumbledore has developed a sudden unexpected malware infection and Lucius is just weird.

  2. What the hell is up with Dumbledore's preference system?? He prefers Hermione (a probable innocent) going to Azkaban above Harry going into debt, and prefers that in turn over Harry destroying Azkaban and every last Dementor. What is Fawkes doing sitting on his shoulder? Hitting him with a wing... No. Should be pecking his eyes out.

  3. And then, what is up with Lucius? After going on so strong about why he would never trade his son's blood debt for money (yep, taboo trade off) he then... trades the blood debt for money! Huh?

OK, there's the phoney blood-debt to House Potter in the mix somewhere, but he knows it's phoney, and didn't have to accept it. If he were serious about his son's life as a sacred value, then he wouldn't.

The only theory I have is that Lucius knows full well now that Hermione didn't do it. (Harry handed him the idiot ball, he quickly got the point, and updated, though of course couldn't admit to that in front of everyone). So there is no longer a taboo in swapping one phoney debt for another; it's now all about mundane values like political advantage, personal prejudice (sticking it to the Mudblood), trying to embarrass Dumbledore and Boy-Who-Lived with impossible proposals, the off-chance of more gold to add to his pile; all tempered with confusion about whether the Dark Lord is really reborn, what he really wants out of the Mudblood, and why isn't he being let in on the new master-plan?? Truly a vile little worm.

Comment author: AspiringKnitter 28 March 2012 11:51:20PM 1 point [-]

I agree; Lucius knows Hermione is innocent (not that she didn't do it) and the clue about the Wizengamot fizzled out.

However, I think Dumbledore's preferred outcomes here seem to be the smallest disturbances of the status quo. (Fawkes needs to give him a few more thwacks.) Hermione going to Azkaban disturbs things less than Harry going into debt disturbs things less than Harry destroying Azkaban. So at least there does seem to be a consistent utility function here. (The other, highly improbable, explanation for that preference ranking is that he approves of dementors feeding on innocents in general.)

I think Lucius is mostly grandstanding, just saying whatever will make him seem most like a formidable politician and least like he's backing down.

Comment author: Duncan 28 March 2012 04:56:14AM 0 points [-]

How do you propose organizing a 'master list' of solutions, relevant plot pieces, etc. given the current forum format? Some people have made some lists, but they are often quickly buried beneath other comments. I'm also not familiar enough with how things work to know if a post can be edited days after it has been posted. One obvious solution is that a HPMOR reader who likes making webpages puts up wiki page for this. Can this be done on Lesswrong.com?

Comment author: Rejoyce 28 March 2012 05:01:51AM 0 points [-]

If we held off proposing solutions the first two days of analysis wouldn't get buried down in the first place. And to answer your question, forum posts can be edited, and the date posted is marked with an asterisk if it was. A wiki sounds sensible but it might be a little too complex for those who are unfamiliar with it, not to mention there'd be tons of editing conflicts going on. I propose Google Docs, for its real-time collaboration, or any other similar alternative. Etherpad?

Comment author: Duncan 28 March 2012 04:31:36AM *  1 point [-]

Eliezer Yudkowsky's Author Notes, Chp. 81
This makes me worry that the actual chapter might’ve come as an anticlimax, especially with so many creative >suggestions that didn’t get used. I shall poll the Less Wrong discussants and see how they felt before I decide whether >to do this again. This was actually intended as a dry run for a later, serious “Solve this or the story ends sadly” puzzle – >like I used in Part 5 of my earlier story Three Worlds Collide - but I’ll have to take the current outcome into account when >deciding whether to go through with that.

Let me argue that this chapter was in no way an anticlimax:

  • We had no way to know which solution Harry might have come up with or picked (I like the hat trick still even though I figured that was not likely the solution of choice).
  • Neither Harry nor Eliezer are omniscient
  • Harry was under a lot of time pressure and had less information to work with than the readers
  • There is a lot of 'motivation' to keep the story interesting which limits the available solution space (i.e., any solution that results in a terrible story is not really an option)
  • A lot of entertainment is derived from 'watching' HOW things play out. History, movies, fiction, etc. are interesting to me for this reason and not because the main character did everything flawlessly.
  • If Eliezer does want to do a puzzle plot piece I strongly recommend accounting for fact that many of us read this story to relax and do NOT exercise our full investigative powers on solving story problems as that involves a lot of boring (for me at least) mundane work when done properly.
Comment author: Lavode 28 March 2012 04:10:35AM 0 points [-]

Right, Lucius is no longer the only powerful and intelligent wizard who thinks that Harry is Voldemort. If any of the others are inclined towards the public good they are probably now plotting his demise. This does not count as a win.

Lucius.. Probably thinks that the entire point of this ploy was to increase the legend of "the boy who lived" and is kicking himself for playing into it. On the other hand, he did get compensated very well.

Other likely consequences: Hermonie is going to read his note as soon as she gets back on something resembling an even footing, simply to find out how he did that.

Lucius might share his reasoning with his son. This seems likely, in fact.

The money are minor As long as the option of trading with muggles occurs to you, any wizard could raise that sort of cash.

Comment author: Anubhav 28 March 2012 04:01:28AM 0 points [-]

New HPMOR discussion thread here.

Comment author: Asymmetric 28 March 2012 03:52:36AM 0 points [-]

How likely do you all think it is that Harry will defeat Voldemort (as per the prophesy) by the end of his first year?

Comment author: Normal_Anomaly 28 March 2012 12:42:20PM 0 points [-]

EY said in an author's note somewhere that the story will not extend past the end of Harry's first year, but that as much plot will be wrapped up by the end as was in canon. So, for meta-story reasons only, pretty likely.

Comment author: linkhyrule5 28 March 2012 03:03:42AM *  7 points [-]

And that is how you do a Mood Whiplash right. I was incredibly nervous going into the chapter, and laughing the moment I saw the word "marriage."

Also, I think that Harry actually managed to make a slightly conciliatory argument at the end there. Namely, "If you don't piss me off any more, I can be a really, really powerful ally. And I'm in debt to you."

Comment author: AspiringKnitter 28 March 2012 02:43:11AM 6 points [-]

Looks like the LessWrong readership called it. Both plans, even. Congratulations, people who guessed quicker than I did.

I notice that Harry's view of the Wizengamot as a faceless entity doesn't actually seem to have changed this chapter. So much for that hint.

Also, it would be nice to know which members of the Wizengamot now think Harry is Voldemort and why they think he decided to pretend to die or whatever they think happened.

Comment author: Percent_Carbon 28 March 2012 01:58:34PM 0 points [-]

A faceless entity is much more than wallpaper. There was change.

Comment author: aladner 28 March 2012 02:32:23AM 3 points [-]

Of course now there is the matter of paying back the debt. He has several more options than he did before. He could cash in a few more of his imperious-debts (which are each apparently worth 10,000 galleons and a pureblood girl). He could raise an army of dementors as his mob and have wealthy purebloods pay for "protection" (highly unlikely, but his dark side might consider it). Or he could simply conquer magical Britain before he graduates and disregard the debt.

Comment author: SkyDK 28 March 2012 02:59:15AM 8 points [-]

Harry has already figured out quite a few solutions to the monetary problem. The long run (and cheap solution) would be to apply himself and his side to the clearing of Hermione's name. That wouldn't just earn him a 100.000 galleons it would also improve Hermione's political standing, leave Malfoy's (and to a certain extent Dumbledore's) reputation in its currently weakened state plus strengthen his argument against the political structure of Magical Britain. Not to mention he can do all this WHILE having starting his money-making schemes. Though we might as well not care since I seem to recall that the great EY seems to have said that this story ends after the first year of Hogwarts. Regardless: the interesting part is what kind of extra power Lucius has vis-a-vis Harry now.

Comment author: Paulovsk 28 March 2012 10:19:46AM 0 points [-]

I seem to recall that the great EY seems to have said that this story ends after the first year of Hogwarts.

Wait... what?

Comment author: aladner 28 March 2012 03:12:03AM 0 points [-]

You're right, I had completely forgotten about clearing Hermione. The first two options I listed could still be used to pay back the debt if the rules surrounding it are too ridiculous, though. This is, of course, simply an extension of his other money-making schemes or a possible source of starting capital.

Comment author: SkyDK 28 March 2012 03:41:15AM 1 point [-]

My only problem with the two listed options is that they both require him to renege on important political capital. I'd rather go for some arbitraging then (perhaps with time-turn earned lottery start-up capital).

If smartly done he'd find the number of some lottery tickets, #5 or #6; buy said tickets and get the memory removed of why and how he did it.

... In general a time turner should make the whole money-making part easier than what's worth thinking about.

Comment author: 75th 28 March 2012 02:23:31AM 6 points [-]
Comment author: aladner 28 March 2012 02:26:23AM 0 points [-]

Indeed. I knew this chapter would be entertaining, but I didn't think it would be that good.

Comment author: Tuna-Fish 28 March 2012 02:08:09AM 1 point [-]

It seems that AN for Ch. 81 is up now, but the chapter isn't. Is this normal?

(the first time I'm waiting for the update frantically hitting refresh...)

Comment author: Eliezer_Yudkowsky 28 March 2012 02:19:09AM 1 point [-]

At 7:09, it should have been up already. Maybe you've got to hit shift-reload to see it? http://hpmor.com/chapter/81

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 02:30:20AM 0 points [-]

Saw it, read it, love it. Still wondering why you're updating on different days alternating weeks, though.

Comment author: gyokuro 28 March 2012 02:20:19AM *  0 points [-]

404 not found, something is wrong here..

Edit: never mind, now it is found! Thank you.

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 02:14:43AM 1 point [-]

twitch

Must...not...read...Author's...note...spoilers!

Comment author: Pringlescan 28 March 2012 01:27:55AM -1 points [-]

"It's all right, Gregory," Draco said, as gently as he could. "All you've got to do is worry about protecting me. Nobody's going to blame you for following my orders, not my father, not yours."

Hmm I wonder how much trouble they are in, they were supposed to keep Draco from harm and he almost got killed.

Comment author: wedrifid 28 March 2012 01:44:40AM *  0 points [-]

"It's all right, Gregory," Draco said, as gently as he could. "All you've got to do is worry about protecting me. Nobody's going to blame you for following my orders, not my father, not yours."

Which isn't to say Draco wouldn't cheerfully discard him as a cat's paw for following orders. Working with ruthless people is dangerous.

Comment author: Xachariah 27 March 2012 11:58:09PM *  8 points [-]

I am now convinced (>51%) that Harry is going to sell out Quirrell to buy Hermione's freedom. I originally came to this hypothesis because it is a solid plan; Harry frames Professor Quirrell using his knowledge of Azkaban to free Hermione. He can do this by framing Quirrell as Voldemort, but each conjunction makes a probability less likely so I'll stick with just the above (even though I personally believe this will be the case). With the Watsonian parts hammered down, I'm awestruck by the elegance of the Doylist reasons.

Instead of looking at fiction as a series of words, we can instead look at it as a way to maximize tension, humor, and dramatic irony while keeping believability as strong as possible. Believability is important. Many other stories have their characters act stupid or out of character to create dramatic moments. At the eleventh hour a (badfanfic!)Harry decides to run off instead of get his friends, or randomly (badfanfic!)Hermione decides to side with Lucius for no goddamn reason. In HPMoR's case, we will have everyone working in their own rational self interest, intelligently, and coming out with a result that flows seamlessly to create maximal drama.

Harry falsely (accidentally truthfully) rats out Quirrell to save Hermione. From Harry's point of view he'll be forced to attack a (guilty but he thinks) innocent man who's done nothing but help him. Harry knows that Quirrell offered to fake a Voldemort fight for him (partially easing Harry's guilt), but now he's doing it without his consent. +1 irony for using Quirrell's own plan against him.

From Lucius' point of view he'll have (Harry!)Voldemort lying about the existence of Voldemort to his face. Lucius will inadvertently help Harry by preventing legillimency being done on Harry because Lucius thinks Harry is Voldemort and Voldemort is an occlumens. Even while we and Harry know he's not Voldemort, Lucius will not. And Harry will think that Lucius will be helping Harry because he wants to back out of taking revenge while saving face in front of the Wizengamot. Meanwhile Lucius will merely want to prevent the higher standard of evidence from being admitted and realize he's been outmaneuvered by (who he thinks is) the Dark Lord.

From Quirrell's point of view he'll have enacted a perfect plan to break Harry's 'side of goodness' while having Lucius destroy Dumbledore for him... only to be foiled by that fool boy messing up the plan again. Just like in Azkaban he'll underestimate Harry's need to save others, but in this case it'll take the form of betraying Quirrell. Since Harry is the only person Quirrell has ever liked (or possibly even loved), he can take this opportunity to turn even more evil and declare Harry his mortal enemy etc. It's possible he's even already laid the groundwork to break Hermione out (ex imperius the auror transferring her), but did not think for Harry to fail two of his lessons at once (be willing to lose / avada kedavra lesson in azkaban).

The story will get to use the investments from TSPE, Occlumency training, and Lucius' belief in Harrymort. I'm actually kind of in awe of this. Each one of those flowed naturally to create a believable world and fascinating reading in themselves. But that they can be recycled with such efficiency is amazing. Hopefully it's not just hindsight bias, but I'm seeing threads all the way back 50 chapters woven together. It makes me view Eliezer with a kind of formidableness in storytelling, like the ET Jaynes of fanfiction.

From a narrative point of view, the Voldemort reveal to the world has to occur soon. Voldemort needs to become an adversary to Harry before the final act, and it would require an entire build-up cycle again to make that happen. The Voldemort reveal (to harry) has to occur eventually as well and this preserves it until the very end for maximal drama.

So, in universe it makes sense. Out of universe it creates a beautiful story. I suspect it's too clever a resolution for Eliezer not to write. If I am correct in my guess, remember that Eliezer is a writer maximizing good storytelling and drama, not a writing trying to trick his audience. Plus, no one reading the chapters as a completed book would have ever figured it out, even as the parts flowed seamlessly together.

And if I'm incorrect in my guess.... well I guess I get a great lesson in humility and calibrating confidence.

Comment author: Xachariah 28 March 2012 02:36:11AM 15 points [-]

Ack I am slain.

Well, humble pie is the most delicious type of pie.

Comment author: Eliezer_Yudkowsky 29 March 2012 02:08:13AM 1 point [-]

If it's any consolation, it would've been elegant - it's just that it didn't happen to be where all the story momentum of the last 80 chapters was, in fact, going.

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 02:03:30AM 0 points [-]

I think Quirrell will be a hell of a lot harder to frame than that, and that stumbling block alone drops the odds below even.

Comment author: Xachariah 28 March 2012 02:08:30AM 0 points [-]

I suppose we will find out any minute now as soon as it updates.

I imagine Quirrell would have planned perfectly to prevent any suspicion to fall on him. But even he might not be able to imagine being framed for a crime he actually committed.

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 02:15:45AM 1 point [-]

That would be a pretty serious failure of imagination for a guy like him.

Comment author: wedrifid 28 March 2012 12:53:37AM 3 points [-]

I am now convinced (>51%)

Not just >=51%. >51%. That's pretty certain! ;)

Comment author: Xachariah 28 March 2012 01:03:04AM 1 point [-]

Haha, good catch. Well, I mean to say that it takes up the majority of my probability mass.

Also, I'm exactly 1% more confident than >50%. >_<

Comment author: arundelo 28 March 2012 01:27:28AM 5 points [-]

Just a little bit more
than
a little bit more

than half.

Comment author: ArisKatsaris 28 March 2012 12:28:20AM *  2 points [-]

I love your idea. Just reading about it made me want to update downwards my confidence on my own earlier prediction, because indeed yours is narratively very elegant.

I don't think Eliezer will be doing what you suggest, but even if he doesn't I might even be interested in reading a parallel fic/path that follows this suggestion instead...

Comment author: Pringlescan 28 March 2012 12:02:23AM 0 points [-]

Well if everyone is right, you and I will be learning the lesson together.

Comment author: [deleted] 27 March 2012 11:04:10PM 17 points [-]

I thought you all might find this amusing: I just got a friend to read HPMoR, and now he's planning on using parts of it to teach his Intro to Psych course.

I think he's planning to use Ch 8 (Hermione's Comed-Tea test) and the chapter(s) with Draco and Harry doing the Blood Purity experiment.

I don't remember MY Intro to Psych course being anywhere NEAR that interesting...

Comment author: drethelin 27 March 2012 06:18:38PM 0 points [-]

This might be too many in a short time, but do we want to make a new thread before the next update gets posted, considering this one's ALREADY at 400?

Comment author: Normal_Anomaly 27 March 2012 04:55:27PM 7 points [-]

Sticking my neck out with a prediction, at the eleventh hour: I think that 1) the most likely solution of any proposed is that Harry will call in the debts owed to him by some of the Wizengamot members, 2) the true culprit behind the duel, GHD attack, and possible other mind-magic will eventually be revealed but not necessarily in this chapter, and that 3) it's probably Quirrel. Note that this shouldn't be taken as one giant conjunction, just three independent predictions.

Comment author: Normal_Anomaly 27 March 2012 07:36:26PM 1 point [-]

Another prediction that I forgot to put the first time:
Even if Harry's solution is not to call in his debts, it will not be violent, it will involve wizarding law and/or tradition, and Hermione and Harry will go back to school (as opposed to being fugitives/"off the grid").

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 05:09:34PM 4 points [-]

Sticking my neck out with a prediction, at the eleventh hour: I think that 1) the most likely solution of any proposed is that Harry will call in the debts owed to him by some of the Wizengamot members, 2) the true culprit behind the duel, GHD attack, and possible other mind-magic will eventually be revealed but not necessarily in this chapter, and that 3) it's probably Quirrel. Note that this shouldn't be taken as one giant conjunction, just three independent predictions.

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 08:01:27PM 2 points [-]

Another prediction that I forgot to put the first time:

Even if Harry's solution is not to call in his debts, it will not be violent, it will involve wizarding law and/or tradition, and Hermione and Harry will go back to school (as opposed to being fugitives/"off the grid").

Comment author: Normal_Anomaly 27 March 2012 04:57:19PM 3 points [-]

Oh, and can someone reply to the parent with a copy of it so I can't edit my prediction after the fact? Thanks.

Comment author: ArisKatsaris 27 March 2012 05:09:12PM *  3 points [-]

Besides FAWS' suggestion of just not editing your comment, and so it lacking an asterisk you can also use predictionbook to record such predictions ( http://predictionbook.com/predictions/6147 and http://predictionbook.com/predictions/6148 are relevant to your first prediction )

Comment author: FAWS 27 March 2012 05:02:20PM 3 points [-]

If you keep refraining from editing it the comment won't display the asterisk after the positing time signifying that the comment has been edited, so people will know you made the prediction at the posting time.

Comment author: moritz 27 March 2012 03:01:39PM 9 points [-]

Maybe this is the wrong place to ask, but are there any other cool pieces of "edufiction" like HPMoR? I mean fiction where you can learn about science, economics or other topics just by reading the story, and thinking along with it.

There is lots of historic fiction material, so I'd like to exclude that genre from my question.

Comment author: Bugmaster 28 March 2012 01:53:44AM 1 point [-]

Terry Pratchett's Maurice and his Educated Rodents (as well as his other books) is educational, though probably not about science.

Comment author: Alejandro1 27 March 2012 07:48:25PM 1 point [-]

Neal Stephenson's books often have lots to learn from, e.g. cryptography in Cryptonomicon or economics in The Baroque Cycle (though the latter is historical fiction).

Comment author: Bugmaster 28 March 2012 01:59:46AM 1 point [-]

I personally detested the The Baroque Cycle, which was boring and badly written, though possibly useful as a cure for insomnia.

However, Stephenson's other books had a lot of good stuff in them, and were actually enjoyable. Snow Crash and Diamond Age contain quite a few notes on economics; and the middle part of Diamond Age consists on a brief overview of the history of computer programming, from Turing Machines to modern information networks. And Anathem is basically a philosophy/epistemology/astronomy primer.

Note that I disagree with some of the key assumptions Stephenson seems to be making in those books (especially Diamond Age and Anathem), but I can still suspend disbelief long enough to enjoy them.

Comment author: Nornagest 27 March 2012 08:07:36PM *  6 points [-]

The trouble with Stephenson's books is that he tends to make a lot of stuff up and insert it into the exposition in such a way that it's difficult to tell it from the trustworthy material. Cryptonomicon and The Baroque Cycle aren't so bad about this, but someone who'd, say, learned most of their neoplatonic philosophy from Anathem might come out the other side with some very strange ideas indeed -- even if they'd thought, and bothered, to look up the real-world cognates of all his academic smeerps.

Charles Stross is another author with similar habits -- although his style is more referential, which makes it essential to keep a laptop with a Wikipedia tab open next to the chair you're reading in, but ends up drawing a somewhat clearer line between science and fiction.

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 08:20:02PM 2 points [-]

Can I just say I experienced mind-boggling surprise (and a corresponding increase in my respect for you) when I realized that was not a TVTropes link?

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 01:57:16AM 1 point [-]

Why would that be worth an increase in respect?

Comment author: pedanterrific 28 March 2012 02:42:26AM 0 points [-]

Come to think of it, I suppose lesswrong is one of the few places where it might be reasonable to assume that someone links directly to a Trope Namer because they're more familiar with it than the trope.

But as a general rule, because I'm against (and susceptible to) tab explosions.

Comment author: gwern 27 March 2012 08:16:12PM 5 points [-]

And in the good direction, you have someone like Peter Watts, who sometimes includes appendixes explaining exactly what science he's based his speculation on.

Comment author: bogdanb 27 March 2012 10:04:37PM *  1 point [-]

Or Greg Egan, who publishes on-line appendixes to his books explaining, say, how Riemannian Thermodynamics would work. With equations and graphics. (Labeled axes!) And video simulations. The appendixes themselves have appendixes!

Comment author: gwern 27 March 2012 10:32:35PM 0 points [-]

Indeed. On the other hand, The Clockwork Rocket was a rubbish novel qua novel, so there's such a thing as taking it too far.

Comment author: bogdanb 28 March 2012 04:26:57PM *  1 point [-]

Well, he did the same thing with earlier novels, The Clockwork Rocket is just the one that came to mind since it's the latest.

But I found his other novels (at least those where such extra material would make sense) similar in style. I’d call it “unusual physics porn”—no literary masterpieces, but fun to read if you’re into that kind of stuff.

Do you dislike his other work, too, or is there something about this one in particular you disliked?

Comment author: gwern 28 March 2012 04:42:49PM 1 point [-]

No, just that one. I liked "Crystal Nights" or Permutation City a lot.

Comment author: Alsadius 27 March 2012 06:38:12PM *  6 points [-]

They're not books, I know, but sometimes videogames can be surprisingly educational, especially in fields like economics where it works the same in game and in reality. If you ever want a crash course in all things economic, become a trader in Eve Online.

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 08:41:00PM 1 point [-]

Games are essential for getting a feel for economics - because you can game them.

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 01:56:03AM 2 points [-]

Also, a game that explicitly allows scams, and celebrates the really good ones, seems like good training for some of the less-pleasant bits of reality. (I started learning real-world finance after I'd already gotten a handle on the Eve variety, and I have to say, the ethics section seemed to read like a list of all the fun bits of the job. It was pretty disconcerting, actually.)

Comment author: kilobug 27 March 2012 05:06:04PM 3 points [-]

I would say Voltaire's philosophical tales (Zadig, Candid) apply to that qualification, even if they are more written in order to defend a particular pov than about educating in general.

Hard science-fiction could also qualify, it often contains some valid bits of science. But it's hard to tell the limit between the author's imagination and the real science.

Anyway, I second the question, it would be interesting to have more of those.

Comment author: NancyLebovitz 27 March 2012 06:17:25PM *  10 points [-]

I recommend repeating your question as a discussion post so that more people will see it.

Comment author: roystgnr 27 March 2012 05:51:03PM 0 points [-]

There are a couple Charles Sheffield books (the story collection "The Compleat McAndrew" is one; I forget which other(s)) where an appendix essay distinguishes the well-supported science from the scientific community's speculation and from the author's own speculation.

I wouldn't put them in the same category as HPMoR, though - they're clearly written to be exciting stories that happen to teach a little interesting science rather than exciting science that happens to be in the form of an interesting story.

Comment author: major 27 March 2012 08:22:48AM 5 points [-]

As we know, Harry's idea of double memory-charm has not been presented to the Wizengamot, which is a good thing; not only is it low status, as Harry realized, it's also unlikely to work, as Snape pointed out. Also, that's not what happened.

Hermione has been told the right lie, to lead her through the right emotions - a growing suspicion towards Draco, mainly - and then she was Obliviated, and told the same lie over again, went through the same emotions again, and again. If the sense of disorientation isn't a problem, she could have been looped through just the final, triggering sentence. Comulative effects had left her with the reoccuring thoughts and nagging doubts, the obsession we were told about. Even the idea of confronting Draco at the next battle, or keeping her doubts to herself could have been planted this way.

Hopefully it will be seen as a typical Voldemort-like cleverness by enough of the Wizengamot for the rest to work. In fact, redirecting Lucius's anger towards the real perpetrator should be doable, and most of his faction (politics!) would be eager to accept Harry's suggestion that Dumbledore was foolish enough to let an agent of the Dark Lord teach at Hogwarts - I doubt it would be a good idea to reveal the truth too early.

Quirrell, who, I think, is still held within the Ministry, will be brought for questioning, and revealed to be Voldemort. Whether it will be his power or the Bystander Effect (the title of the next trigger warning page) that holds the Wizengamot back long enough, I don't know. Actually, a single threat could make most of them hesitate long enough... Than, just as planned, he tries to kill Harry, explodes, then it's cheers and Butterbeers all 'round.

Harry will choose to cooperate with this plan because he will see it's aim wasn't to kill his friends - Draco could have been left for dead, and wasn't - and because he doesn't have five days to think of anything else.

It would be a serious change in the story and, with Quirrell gone, he couldn't fulfill his promise of both Slytherin and Ravenclaw winning the House Cup - but these things would not motivate Voldemort to pass on this opportunity, I think.

Comment author: Anubhav 27 March 2012 12:42:10PM 1 point [-]

Your explanation of the Groundhog Day attack is the only one I've seen so far that makes sense.

Comment author: Alsadius 27 March 2012 06:24:12PM 2 points [-]

You don't buy the trial-and-error argument?

Comment author: Jonathan_Elmer 27 March 2012 05:00:32PM 8 points [-]

Alternatively it could have been a way to determine the right memory charm to achieve the desired effect without using legilimency

The Potions Master was frowning thoughtfully, eyes intent. "The reaction to a False Memory Charm is hard to predict in advance, Mr. Potter, without Legilimency. The subjects do not always act as expected, when they first remember the false memories. It would have been a risky ploy. But I suppose that is one way Professor Quirrell could have done it.".

Comment author: alex_zag_al 27 March 2012 08:32:06PM 6 points [-]

Like how in the GHD iteration we saw, she revealed that she was susceptible to believing that Snape is a Death Eater, and that it'd be hard to convince her that Harry would betray her. And, in fact, she was led to believe bad things about Snape, but not Harry:

She has been thinking of how Mr. Malfoy might be in league with Professor Snape, how he might be planning to harm her and harm Harry - imagining it for hours every day

(Dumbledore in Ch79)

Comment author: 75th 27 March 2012 01:49:18AM *  14 points [-]

I just penned a few thoughts on maintaining proper pessimism about Methods's future. (I also teased Eliezer and, indirectly, Less Wrong commenters a bit. It's all tongue-in-cheek and in a spirit of friendship.)

If anyone can think of a better title for that post, do let me know. I couldn't come up with a pithy Rationalist phrase that quite fit it.

Comment author: Anubhav 27 March 2012 08:14:15AM *  1 point [-]

if I saw legions of ridiculous, cockamamie theories about my story get treated with absolute seriousness on web forums and TV Tropes, I might purposely spoil the ending in my sarcasm-dripping condescension

That clinches it; 75th is my alter ego. You know, a la Tyler Durden or something.

Comment author: Vaniver 27 March 2012 03:49:58AM 3 points [-]

Through the Author’s Notes we’ve seen his struggle in motivating himself to write new chapters in a timely manner. This happens to everyone when a fun project becomes an obligation to people, and even at his Rationality Level he is not immune.

Rationality is the technique that turns motivations into plans. It is not a technique to generate motivation, except very indirectly.

Comment author: wedrifid 27 March 2012 10:15:15AM 3 points [-]

Rationality is the technique that turns motivations into plans. It is not a technique to generate motivation, except very indirectly.

Strongly disagree. Maintaining and managing motivation should be built into any practical plan for trying to achieve a goal. This applies both in the abstract sense (all rational agents will self modify so that they more effectively achieve their goals) and as a ubiquitous consideration in human rational planning.

Comment author: Vaniver 27 March 2012 06:25:06PM *  2 points [-]

Maintaining and managing motivation should be built into any practical plan for trying to achieve a goal.

This is what I meant by "very indirectly."

[edit] "Very" might have been an overstatement; it probably should have just been "indirectly."

Comment author: wedrifid 28 March 2012 12:21:08AM 0 points [-]

We can also add that a large component of 'motivation' can also be compartmentalized off into a general 'motivation' goal - leaving only specific reinforcement and boredom minimisation aspect as part of the more direct plan.

Comment author: Pringlescan 27 March 2012 05:25:20AM 3 points [-]

Hmm I don't think that's a very good description. Rationality means setting rational goals to accomplish what you actually want, and then understanding the world around you and yourself well enough to systematically and logically accomplish those goals. It would certainly include studying yourself to understand how to generate motivation.

Comment author: Vaniver 27 March 2012 06:27:11PM 2 points [-]

Rationality means setting rational

That sounds circular to me.

goals to accomplish what you actually want, and then understanding the world around you and yourself well enough to systematically and logically accomplish those goals.

That sounds like turning motivations (i.e. goals) into plans.

It would certainly include studying yourself to understand how to generate motivation.

Indeed, as an indirect step.

Comment author: TobyBartels 01 April 2012 04:30:18PM 0 points [-]

Rationality means setting rational

That sounds circular to me.

The adjective ‘rational’ is just superfluous there; the grandparent should simply remove it.

Comment author: Vaniver 01 April 2012 11:17:18PM 0 points [-]

"Rational," as an adjective for goals, typically means something like "internally consistent" or "long-sighted" or "wise," and so in general "rational goals" and "goals" mean different things. In a definition for rationality, though, it's inappropriate.

Comment author: TobyBartels 02 April 2012 05:54:48AM 0 points [-]

I didn't mean that it was superfluous in front of ‘goals’ but that it was superfluous in a definition of ‘rationality’, so we agree about that. And Pringlescan's definition makes sense if it's removed.

Comment author: faul_sname 27 March 2012 05:38:03AM 0 points [-]

If you're defining rationality as the definition given on this site, you're right. If you're defining rationality as the thing that's actually discussed on here, you're not.

Comment author: Carinthium 28 March 2012 12:22:23PM 0 points [-]

What do you claim would be a good definition for rationality as actually discussed?

Comment author: faul_sname 28 March 2012 08:02:11PM 1 point [-]

How to think clearly.

Comment author: 0ericire0 30 March 2012 11:31:57PM 0 points [-]

Deconstruct that, it means little

Comment author: faul_sname 30 March 2012 11:41:13PM 1 point [-]

How to develop correct beliefs about the world, with an emphasis on compensating for systematic errors and biases caused by suboptimal hardware.

Comment author: Pringlescan 27 March 2012 05:07:40PM 1 point [-]

They could use some more sequences on how to motivate yourself, if I recall there was one written by lukefrog but it wasn't very good.

Comment author: Locke 27 March 2012 03:30:31AM 3 points [-]

I think things could end up worse than that. Harry's solution, whatever it may be, could well tip off Lucius that he is not in fact Voldemort. And once he's got Hermione out, Lord Malfoy would go after this first-year hard, before he can grow up. A few threats to a few parents and Harry and Hermione will find themselves seized by five seventh-years and portkeyed to Malfoy Manor.

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 08:49:24PM 2 points [-]

But Harry is in fact Voldemort - in a certain unconscious sense.

Lucius decided that he is Harrymort because of Harry's reply to Quirrel's Christmas speech, but he would never have thought about it if the preexisting Harry Potter - Voldemort connection had not brought the hypothesis to mind. And that connection, the hints that make up the real majority of the evidence for the Harrymort hypothesis, is made of true evidence.

If Lucius now came to disbelieve in Harrymort, he would not be discarding a completely false hypothesis.

Comment author: Jonathan_Elmer 27 March 2012 06:41:04AM *  0 points [-]

Maybe the reason McGonagall knew that Dumbledore was behind the Santa Claus portkey is because only the headmaster could create a portkey that would work inside the Hogwarts wards. Quirrell took Harry outside the wards in order to portkey him to Diagon Alley.

Your point still stands though because there are surely other things that they could do.

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 11:57:10AM *  5 points [-]

Britain holds that you need Dumbledore's permission to emigrate to magical America, but magical America disagrees. So in the final extremity, get outside the wards of Hogwarts and tear in half the King of Hearts from this deck of cards.

Edit: Wow, did I do that?

Comment author: Anubhav 27 March 2012 08:12:14AM *  0 points [-]

Maybe the reason McGonagall knew that Dumbledore was behind the Santa Claus portkey is because only the headmaster could create a portkey that would work inside the Hogwarts wards.

Then again, Snape didn't realize that just from hearing about the portkey. This theory's probably inaccurate.

Retracting as per pedanterrific's comment.

Comment author: Daniel_Starr 27 March 2012 01:14:59AM *  27 points [-]

Hypothesis:

Quirrellmort intends to upload his mind into Harry's body soon, as soon as Harry is Dark enough. Voldemort will become the Boy-Who-Lived. And Quirrellmort wants or needs this to happen within the next few months.

Evidence:

If Quirrellmort were only after the Philosopher's Stone and training Harry for a long career, he'd keep his own cover intact as long as he could. Instead, over the last few story months, Quirrellmort has cheerfully all but ruined his cover in favor of giving Harry chances to turn Dark.

  • Quirrellmort got the Dementor brought to Hogwarts, waited until the last moment to observe Harry's wand by the Dementor's cage, gave wrong advice about how to help Harry recover from the Dementor-induced personality change, and persuaded the other wizards to let Harry face the Dementor again.
  • Quirrellmort took Harry to Azkaban soon after seeing Patronus 2.0, leading to more Dementor contact and the recovery of Bellatrix, Quirrellmort's preferred assistant for critical tasks (like, say, ritual magic to download yourself into your Horcrux's body).
  • Quirrellmort (as H&C) set up Hermione for Draco's attempted murder, thus both cutting off Harry from the person who's his best influence against being Dark, and motivating Harry to embrace his Dark side more in order to rescue or avenge Hermione.

The first stunt made Dumbledore suspect a plot, the second showed that Voldemort had returned, the third that Voldemort was in Hogwarts. But it's all been worth it to Quirrellmort to hurry up Dark!Harry. Why?

Perhaps because Quirrellmort is running out of time in his current body.

  • On the day he killed Rita Skeeter, she observed Quirrellmort had his hair falling out.
  • Harry has noticed Quirrell looking visibly older.
  • The curse on the Defense against the Dark Arts position demands a terrible conclusion to his year - or at least the appearance of one.

And if Quirrellmort doesn't intend to be around as Quirrell much longer, what does he intend? We have clues.

  • We know from the prophecy that Quirrellmort and Harry can destroy each other's spirits.
  • Quirrellmort has said that Harry's sense of doom between them is precisely of Harry's doom.
  • We suspect from canon combined with "Dark Harry" moments that Harry is an accidental Horcrux containing a partial copy of Voldemort's mental circuitry, and possibly some of his power too.
  • Quirrellmort suggested a plan where Harry would be seen to fight the returned Voldemort and defeat him.

The obvious answer is that Quirrellmort intends just the plan he told Harry: Harry will indeed be seen to fight Voldemort and "defeat" him. And "Quirrell" will die, probably having been revealed to be Voldemort. But Quirrellmort... will have downloaded himself into Harry's mind, and so will win the duel he seems to lose.

Just as before, a single clash of spells between Voldemort and Harry Potter will lead to the destruction of "Voldemort"(Quirrell.) And "Harry" will walk away triumphant. But "Harry" won't be Harry any more.

If Quirrellmort's plan succeeds, Harry as we know him will cease to exist. Voldemort will go on in triumph -- as Harry Potter, the boy who destroyed Voldemort twice over. Harry will be the beloved hero of magical Britain -- and Voldemort inside.

I suggest Quirrellmort's top priority is to turn Harry fully Dark before the end of the year, so he can safely download into Harry.

Comment author: Vladimir_Nesov 29 March 2012 12:32:54AM *  0 points [-]

That's a plausible plan, anyway. I'm guessing that the current plan might also involve taking over the rest of the magical world, and then the muggle world, a goal that might not have been originally desired or seen immediately feasible, but which acting as Harry could facilitate. Ch. 20 provides a possible motive (prevention of technological existential risks; Riddle is rational enough to notice that comfortable immortality requires as a necessary condition that the world is not destroyed):

"Those fool Muggles will kill us all someday!" Professor Quirrell's voice had grown louder. "They will end it! End all of it!"

Harry was feeling a bit lost here. "What are we talking about here, nuclear weapons?"

"Yes, nuclear weapons!" Professor Quirrell was almost shouting now. "Even He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named never used those, perhaps because he didn't want to rule over a heap of ash! They never should have been made! And it will only get worse with time!" Professor Quirrell was standing up straight instead of leaning on his desk. "There are gates you do not open, there are seals you do not breach! The fools who can't resist meddling are killed by the lesser perils early on, and the survivors all know that there are secrets you do not share with anyone who lacks the intelligence and the discipline to discover them for themselves! Every powerful wizard knows that! Even the most terrible Dark Wizards know that! And those idiot Muggles can't seem to figure it out! The eager little fools who discovered the secret of nuclear weapons didn't keep it to themselves, they told their fool politicians and now we must live under the constant threat of annihilation!"

Comment author: loserthree 28 March 2012 03:05:05PM *  3 points [-]

I only mean to add credibility to your theory when I say that it has been plausible for seventeen months: scroll down to 10/8/10

The author said in an early Author's Note (I think) that someone he knew guessed the main plot from only the mysterious prelude. I'm guessing that person has some special insight that allowed them to just to the right conclusion, probably insight into the kind of story the author would right, possibly based on things that person had recently talked about with the author.

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 09:02:53PM 1 point [-]

On the day he killed Rita Skeeter, she observed Quirrellmort had his hair falling out.

She didn't observe it falling out at that moment. Just that he was balding, as we've known from his first appearance and description.

This could just be natural - some people go bald very early - but probably has some significance. The bald spot is located, presumably, where the canon Quirrelmort had Voldemort's face hidden under a turban. This may just be a reference to that fact, with the intended explanation being that smart!Quirrelmort wouldn't make a stupid mistake like that, but there is still some mark of possession there.

Harry has noticed Quirrell looking visibly older.

That was after the Azkaban affair, during which Quirrel was hurt by the magic-clash, by nearness to Dementors, and by total magical exhaustion. Maybe it was so bad that it literally "took years off his life", maybe because Voldemort doesn't care to maintain the Quirrel body in the best possible order if he can squeeze out more power. Which supports your theory, but is not a case of "he has little time remaining in this body".

The curse on the Defense against the Dark Arts position demands a terrible conclusion to his year - or at least the appearance of one.

The curse placed by Voldemort, as revenge for not being made the Defense Professor, surely wouldn't operate against Voldemort when he finally did get the position. That would be far too stupid of him.

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 01:51:57AM 5 points [-]

Disagree. Breaking the pattern after this many decades right when some creepy dude who openly calls himself evil and encourages children to be Dark Lords gets the job seems like it might as well be hanging a neon sign over your head saying "I'm the Big Bad!".

Comment author: Paulovsk 27 March 2012 02:08:40AM 1 point [-]

Harry as we know him will cease to exist. Voldemort will go on in triumph -- as Harry Potter, the boy who destroyed Voldemort twice over. Harry will be the beloved hero of magical Britain -- and Voldemort inside.

Very structured, but... a sad end? Harry, the almost ratinalist, losing? This seems odd.

Comment author: thomblake 27 March 2012 07:21:45PM *  5 points [-]

Very structured, but... a sad end? Harry, the almost ratinalist, losing? This seems odd.

I've been torn on how probable I think this outcome is, but I wouldn't put it past Eliezer. This is the person who thinks bad end is the default end for humanity, and the universe isn't fair, and bad things are allowed to happen. Even if you work really hard to stop them.

Comment author: Alejandro1 27 March 2012 04:17:21AM 12 points [-]

This may be Quirrell's plan, even if Eliezer intends for Harry to defeat it in some way.

Comment author: buybuydandavis 27 March 2012 07:56:30AM 3 points [-]

Yeah, I assume Harry wins in the end, but I expect EY to give Voldemort a better plan than "expose yourself and all your forces in a mass battle at Hogwarts, though you've been successful until then through secrecy, stealth, and terror".

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 08:56:50PM 0 points [-]

I would like to hope that Eliezer has a surprise in store for anyone who just assumes Harry will win in the end, because he's the protagonist and hero.

Truth isn't that convenient, and rationality (Harry-style) is about facing the truth.

Comment author: buybuydandavis 27 March 2012 10:32:23PM *  1 point [-]

Unless he's writing this as a cautionary tale about unfriendly AI, I expect Mr. Glowy Person to win in the end, even if "The End" is projected beyond the end of the book.

And even if you do end me before I end you, Another will take my place, and another, Until the wound in the world is healed at last...

Comment author: cousin_it 26 March 2012 10:46:11PM *  5 points [-]

It's annoying that the whole fic has been hanging by a thin thread for awhile now for no good reason. When Dumbledore, McGonagall, Snape or anyone else finally tells Harry about horcruxes, Harry will figure out in seconds that Quirrell is Voldemort and that Harry himself is a horcrux. (Quirrell told Harry about the Pioneer plaque, and later asked him about secure ways to lose a thing. Harry remembered Voldemort casting the horcrux spell, but filed it away as a "strange word" in Ch.45. Harry's being a horcrux explains his dark side and his sense of doom near Quirrell. Etc.)

Comment author: Kutta 27 March 2012 09:50:44AM *  7 points [-]

I've the impression that Harry actually has some kind of censor inside his head that prevents him from thinking about the sense of doom concerning Quirrel. He is never shown remembering it and reflecting on it, even though it should be a pretty damn conspicuous and important fact. EDIT: not never, as seen below, but the amount of thought he expends on the matter still seems to be weirdly little.

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 09:07:51PM 7 points [-]

And now that he knows what it means - that his and Quirrel's magics cannot touch each other because they "resonate" - he never tries to research this phenomenon. And he's been told he has the "brother wand" to Voldemort's...

Comment author: TobyBartels 01 April 2012 03:38:14PM 1 point [-]

Yes, yes, and yes. There's a lot of stuff that Harry hasn't followed up on, at least as far as we've been shown. He has his priorities, after all; researching magical resonance won't earn him Quirrell Points!

Comment author: ArisKatsaris 27 March 2012 01:33:42PM 3 points [-]

I've gotten that impression too. Even if McGonnagal had dissuaded him sufficiently from discussing it with others, shouldn't Harry be attempting to make a list of possible hypotheses to explain to himself said "sense of Doom"?

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 12:25:16PM *  6 points [-]

Harry started to get up from his chair, then halted. "Um, sorry, I did have something else I wanted to tell you -"

You could hardly see the flinch. "What is it, Mr. Potter?"

"It's about Professor Quirrell -"

"I'm sure, Mr. Potter, that it is nothing of importance." Professor McGonagall spoke the words in a great rush. "Surely you heard the Headmaster tell the students that you were not to bother us with any unimportant complaints about the Defense Professor?"

Harry was rather confused. "But this could be important, yesterday I got this sudden sense of doom when -"

"Mr. Potter! I have a sense of doom as well! And my sense of doom is suggesting that you must not finish that sentence!"

Harry's mouth gaped open. Professor McGonagall had succeeded; Harry was speechless.

ETA: I agree he doesn't pay as much attention to it as it deserves, but given the reaction he got when he brought it up...

Comment author: beoShaffer 26 March 2012 11:18:57PM 2 points [-]

To be fair, in canon talking about horcruxes was incredibly taboo. Also, while MoR!Harry has done a better job of getting around it most adults in both canons have a tendency to withhold relevant but uncomfortable information from Harry. So it's not that surprising they haven't mentioned it.

Comment author: gjm 26 March 2012 11:09:51PM 5 points [-]

It's chapter 43, not 44, in which Harry remembers (if that's what he's really doing) Voldemort's attack on the Potters. I don't see anything there that looks like Harry hearing Voldemort cast the horcrux spell, and there seems to me some evidence that the strange word he had in his mind in chapter 45 was "riddle". (A word which occurs 4 times in each of chapters 45 and 46, the first time in the following context: "The word echoed in his mind again. All right, Harry thought to himself, if the Dementor is a riddle, what is the answer?" -- And of course a word with a bit of other significance in the HPverse.)

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 09:09:52PM -1 points [-]

I don't understand what you're proposing. That Voldemort, after killing both Harry's parents and presumably with no other listeners there, approached baby Harry and spoke to him the single word, riddle? What would that mean? And why would Harry label it "a strange word" instead of just saying what it was in his stream of consciousness?

Comment author: Vladimir_Nesov 29 March 2012 01:15:00AM 0 points [-]

Harry inherited some aspects of Voldemort's mind and memory (including the memory of that night), which screens off anything that a baby could have merely heard naturally.

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 09:36:11PM 0 points [-]

Well, there's some precedent; Harry previously thinks

"Voldemort?" Harry whispered. It should have been funny, but it wasn't. The name burned with a cold feeling, ruthlessness, diamond clarity, a hammer of pure titanium descending upon an anvil of yielding flesh. A chill swept over Harry even as he pronounced the word, and he resolved then and there to use safer terms like You-Know-Who.

Comment author: Alsadius 28 March 2012 01:48:39AM 0 points [-]

"Voldemort?" Harry whispered. It should have been funny, but it wasn't. The name burned with a cold feeling, ruthlessness, diamond clarity, a hammer of pure titanium descending upon an anvil of yielding flesh. A chill swept over Harry even as he pronounced the word, and he resolved then and there to use safer terms like You-Know-Who.

I was thinking about that bit earlier today - is it just me, or is it about as wildly out of character as anything we've seen yet in this fic? Harry doesn't seem like the type to believe that words have inherent power.

Comment author: Vladimir_Nesov 29 March 2012 02:49:33AM 0 points [-]

The reason for this event is that he has an image of Voldemort associated with the listed qualities sitting in his mind, and thinking "Voldemort" elicited a response.

Comment author: pedanterrific 28 March 2012 02:29:36AM 1 point [-]

Not for no reason, no.

In canon, Voldemort put a (magical) Taboo on the word "Voldemort" so that saying it summoned minions of his to your location. VoldeMoR seems a bit more creative than that, don't you think?

Comment author: TobyBartels 01 April 2012 03:29:51PM 0 points [-]

That this is possible means that anybody who doesn't want to be found this way should always use the same language as everybody else. If you call Voldie ‘Voldemort’ (or ‘Tom Riddle’ or even ‘Voldie’) when everybody else is calling him ‘You-Know-Who’ (or ‘He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named’ or even ‘The Dark Lord’), then you're holding the Idiot Ball. (And it doesn't have to be the caster's name; you shouldn't use any unusual words, or you can be tracked by them.) Not that canon!Dumbledore was holding the Idiot Ball in books 1–6, because this was not possible then; Rowling hadn't thought of it yet. But MoR!Dumbledore seems to be, unless MoR!Taboo works differently.

A good way to balance the Taboo spell might be this: It only works if the speaker knows about the Taboo (although this contradicts canon). Then you can get a nice dilemma: Do you tell people about the Taboo here at Hogwarts, where it's safe so they can practice, but opening them up to the curse later; or do you keep silent, and hope that they aren't surprised by that information later and disoriented thereafter.

Comment author: Alsadius 29 March 2012 06:12:43PM 0 points [-]

Sure, but Harry has no clue that's possible. What actual reason does he have to be afraid of the word? Not a reason we can come up with for why that fear is positive, but one internal to Harry's mind.

Comment author: pedanterrific 29 March 2012 06:21:37PM 1 point [-]

...I was suggesting that Voldemort cast a "be afraid, be very afraid" jinx triggered by his name.

Comment author: DanArmak 27 March 2012 09:45:35PM 0 points [-]

What does that have to do with Voldemort saying "riddle" to a baby, or with Harry thinking "riddle" was a strange word?

I'm clearly missing your point here...

Comment author: pedanterrific 27 March 2012 09:46:13PM *  1 point [-]

I don't think Voldemort said his own name, no.

ETA: You do know Voldemort is Tom Riddle, right?

ETA2: To explain a little more completely: my idea is that the Remembrall lit up because Harry's 'dark side' had forgotten (almost?) everything. Under Dementation it remembered at least that one bit of information. (Also, maybe, explaining how Harry remembered that scene when the neural patterns shouldn't have even still existed; I would feel more confidence in this part if it didn't include a description of how Voldemort appeared from outside.)

Comment author: Vladimir_Nesov 29 March 2012 01:35:49AM 0 points [-]

I would feel more confidence in this part if it didn't include a description of how Voldemort appeared from outside.

Perhaps this was an experience of Riddle's copy, in the moments it was being made, before running on the baby's underdeveloped brain disrupted its functioning.

Comment author: TobyBartels 01 April 2012 03:34:38PM 0 points [-]

Magically, a mind can continue working even without sufficient brain power behind it, as when McGonagall turns into a cat (or even more so when Rita Skeeter turns into a beetle).