I would recommend moving the "Less Wrong is a" text to the upper left corner, above the curve of the skull. When I view the page on my laptop, it appears below the fold, so phrases like "curated community blog" and "a community discussion board" appear without any context.
We'll experiment with a smaller brian first, which may bring the intro text more into view and resolve this issue. If it doesn't, we'll revisit placement of the intro.
The new front page is up.
Previous discussion here.