and the negative karma you gave
I didn't downvote you - please don't assume that a criticism is always accompanied by a downvote.
That she stepped away from Quirrell in no way mandates that she's distrusting Quirrell, it could be many other things.
Quirrell is an idiot if he jumped to the conclusion that she thought he was responsible just because she stepped away from him, that conclusion only makes sense in the context of the information in Hermione's mind.
When her first reaction to his sight was "Are you here to kill me?"
Him naming the exact thought that she had almost immediately after she stepped away from him seems improbable.
Except that he didn't name the exact thought that she had. The thought that she had at the moment was "If the Defense Professor was behind this whole thing then Professor Quirrell had done it all just to get her out of the way of his plans for Harry." -- in short she thought of his motivation. She had already thought of him as number one suspect just before she said "Are you here to kill me?" at the beginning of the encounter.
So he wasn't actually echoing any current thought. He just assumed she thought him responsible, after several obvious physical and verbal indications she feared him.
Quirrell is an idiot if he jumped to the conclusion that she thought he was responsible just because she stepped away from him
He would be an idiot if he didn't jump to that conclusion.
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