What would fix it for you? A brief disclamer, "This is a sample for the most common case of the HUP; related but non-identical processes apply to other cases."??
But as an aside -
How is the angle/action case not meaningfully connected to the momentum/position case, such that really getting one doesn't hands you the other one on a silver platter? After all, momentum/position is the special case of angle/action where the origin of rotation is placed at infinity (at least, classically - you can't make angular momentum eigenstates without enveloping the origin of rotation).
I doubt that a disclaimer would dissuade an aspired non-expert reader from proudly proclaiming her deep understanding of the uncertainty principle and looking down at those who cannot see the proverbial forest for the (QM math) trees.
The only honest position, in my opinion, is to expressly declare that the whole QM sequence is pop-science, not real science, and, while an engaging read, has no meaningful connection to the rest of the sequences.
As for angle/action vs momentum/position vs components of spin, they all are rather different beasts, originally corresponding to different spacetime symmetries to begin with, so I would not feel comfortable trying to salvage a flawed explanation by stretching an analogy.
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