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chaosmosis comments on Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread, part 16, chapter 85 - Less Wrong Discussion

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Comment author: chaosmosis 19 September 2012 04:38:30AM *  -1 points [-]

Example of how to insert a song into fanfictions without making it jarring: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6091629/13/Triwizard-Tournament-Take-Two

Also, that's an excellent fanfiction overall. The premise is fairly standard, but I'm enjoying the execution. Please read it and spam the author with reviews threatening them if they abandon the fic.

Comment author: Alicorn 19 September 2012 04:56:14AM 3 points [-]

I read the first chapter and it doesn't seem particularly good, let alone "excellent". It has thoughts in quotation marks and clumsy narration and dull dialogue. Does it get markedly better a ways in?

Comment author: chaosmosis 20 September 2012 02:33:44AM 1 point [-]

If you haven't liked it so far, I suggest you just stop.

For whatever reason, I enjoyed it.

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