Elo comments on The Winding Path - Less Wrong Discussion
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I found some of this hard to parse;
not sure if it's the syllables; or the word length (or word use) or the switch between negatives and non-negatives; but this sentence was hard to read.
Try this:
(not sure if it's better)
I enjoyed the read once I made sure to read it carefully a second time.
Adjusting! Thank you.
ETA: Corrected some related issues with poor phrasing, particularly implications I didn't intend to imply.