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12 Post author: DataPacRat 10 August 2012 08:53PM

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Comment author: DataPacRat 10 August 2012 10:47:30PM 2 points [-]

I freely admit that, looking back at the first chapters, I wince at how clunky and clumsy I was when trying to present certain ideas. I think I managed to improve at that some, and I am trying to do better still.

I do continue using the protagonist's udder as a plot point in future chapters.

The site is, unfortunately, nicknamed '502fiction' for a reason. I'm now wondering if I should cross-post the story to another site, such as FanFiction.net.

Comment author: Ritalin 29 October 2012 01:00:49AM 0 points [-]

No, don't. 502 not withstanding, that site is awesome.