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Dolores1984 comments on Friendship is Optimal: A My Little Pony fanfic about an optimization process - Less Wrong Discussion

63 Post author: iceman 08 September 2012 06:16AM

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Comment author: Dolores1984 08 September 2012 08:07:35AM 5 points [-]

This is pretty good. I would go through, though, and either reduce, make subtler, or preferably just remove all the parts that would make a LW reader go 'Hey! I read that blog post.'

Comment author: FiftyTwo 08 September 2012 06:22:07PM 5 points [-]

Or alternatively provide links/references at the end for people who haven't read them.