Dolores1984 comments on Friendship is Optimal: A My Little Pony fanfic about an optimization process - Less Wrong Discussion
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This is pretty good. I would go through, though, and either reduce, make subtler, or preferably just remove all the parts that would make a LW reader go 'Hey! I read that blog post.'
Or alternatively provide links/references at the end for people who haven't read them.