That first one is bad mindreading - not bad because it's unsuccessful, although it is (mindreading is dang hard though, so like I said, I don't care). But because it's written from your point of view. If you're trying to mind-read, you should end up with something that's written from the point of view of your model of the other person.
The second guess is closer. Here's my take:
The consequences of charity are examined with skepticism and generalization, and then outcompeting local businesses is immediately proposed as a solution with no thought to the consequences. Each of these parts has their own problems, but writing them one after the other like that is bad out of proportion to the sum of the parts. Thus, *explosion noises*.
I was drawing on my model of another person- but my model was based on so little information that it was very likely to be wrong.
Building on ewbronv's response: The starving man is best off if you open a bakery which can profitably sell him bread at a price he can afford. If there are starving people, it is because food is not available at a price they can afford.
It isn't about driving other companies out of business, it's about meeting an unmet need. If you can make a greater profit than the free market competition, it must be because you are filling nee...
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