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katydee comments on Unfriendly Natural Intelligence - Less Wrong Discussion

8 Post author: Gunnar_Zarncke 15 April 2014 05:05AM

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Comment author: katydee 16 April 2014 01:35:38AM *  1 point [-]

Could you give actionable feedback?

I would run this post (and future posts) past an editor/proofreader who is strongly familiar with the English language prior to posting.

Comment author: Gunnar_Zarncke 16 April 2014 06:59:16AM 1 point [-]

Thank you. I didn't expect that. The feedback on this I got earlier wouldn't have suggested it.

Comment author: Kenny 31 May 2014 05:43:30PM 0 points [-]

I agree that it would be improved by editing by, or based on feedback from, someone with stronger English writing skills, I didn't really mind it that much myself.