Ugh! The vomitous mass of facts and details. I can't stand articles like that. A little quote starts ringing through my mind "When you talk like this, I can't help but wonder, do you have a point?"

Done properly, it's like watching an interlaced image load in. First pass, tell the story in one sentence. Second pass, use a four sentence paragraph. Third pass, four paragraphs. Recurse as needed.

Order still matters on each pass.