Good piece! I really liked the title especially, very evocative. Some of the tips stood well by themselves, such as the align urges with goals.

I would suggest revising some of the other tips to make them either more clear and stand by themselves, or provide more salient links. For example, here's a good link for goal factoring. It gives people a clear series of steps for what to do next. The current link there does not provide clear information on how to do goal factoring.

Nice venue to get published in as well. Congrats on your work to promote rationality that way!