On a side note -
"But what I must actually tell you is that you will find the standard introductory text in the north-northwest stacks of the main Hogwarts library, filed under M."
First, I rather appreciate the comic relief, Eliezer.
... But second, what the heck are Memory Charms doing outside the--
Right. Hogwarts. Crazies. Nevermind.
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I feel like this comes off as a bit of an ass pull. It's the suspicious specificity that does it, I think.
It would be easy to prevent that feeling, if you care to and if it's not just me, with a throwaway line in an earlier chapter.