CronoDAS comments on Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality discussion thread - Less Wrong

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Comment author: CronoDAS 13 July 2010 04:01:29PM 3 points [-]

In summary, my feedback to you is that this particular reader would have benefitted from a replacing of the first occurance of "Charlie" with "My father, Charlie."

Seconded.

Comment author: Alicorn 13 July 2010 06:43:46PM 2 points [-]

Fixed that, and also two typos and the italics.