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ciphergoth comments on A few analogies to illustrate key rationality points - Less Wrong
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The content is good for a top level post. The only thing you might want to change is the grammar/spacing issues (Using « instead of quotes, putting spaces between several punctuation marks, the sentence "Well, that one isn't any new, I'm using since like a decade" in the second paragraph, and a few other minor things.)
Edit for clarification: don't put the spacings between the punctuation marks that are there now.
A substitute would be "Well, this one isn't new, I've been using it for something like a decade" - and I've used the quote marks which are standard for English writing. Is your native language German? Hope this helps!