somervta comments on A My Little Pony fanfic allegedly but not mainly about immortality - Less Wrong
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I have to agree with Eliezer here - stunningly good. I suspect that the problem you are facing is quite simple - at the end, Celestia dies. At the end, she did reject immortality, so readers interpreted that she was making a decision to rid herself of the 'curse' of immortality.