wedrifid comments on Duller blackmail definitions - Less Wrong
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I suggest moving the parenthetical to the end of the paragraph. I had to re-parse that in programming mode before I interpreted the ambiguity in the last sentence correctly and I wouldn't have noticed my confusion at all were I not familiar with the distinctions you are trying to express.
Thanks for the comment - I simply removed the parenthetical, it's not adding much useful in such a short post.