RolfAndreassen comments on Critiquing Gary Taubes, Part 4: What Causes Obesity? - Less Wrong

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Comment author: RolfAndreassen 30 December 2013 07:07:21PM 1 point [-]

Also,

wouldn't have made for as an exciting of a book.

is not as of a good grammatical structure as it could be. I suggest rephrasing.