gwern comments on Open thread, Oct. 20 - Oct. 26, 2014 - Less Wrong

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Comment author: gwern 21 October 2014 02:18:54AM 3 points [-]

is probably not using individual words conscientiously.

I would go further: an author who has not edited down their prose to something tighter and with more bang for the buck is probably too in love with their writing to have carefully edited or considered all the other aspects of their story, such as the plot, pacing, content, or character voices.

Comment author: NancyLebovitz 22 October 2014 02:52:59PM 2 points [-]

Any thoughts or resources about the right amount of redundancy?