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6 Post author: orthonormal 11 October 2011 04:14PM

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Comment author: r_claypool 11 October 2011 06:03:09PM *  4 points [-]

I write overly convoluted sentence structures.

YAKiToMe has helped me with this problem. Hearing the text as speech gives me a new perspective on what I have written; it makes the awkward stuff more obvious.

Comment author: Jonathan_Graehl 12 October 2011 06:04:09AM 1 point [-]

Is closing your eyes and listening to someone read a better test of intelligibility than reading aloud to yourself? I think so, in that it can be easier to fool yourself into thinking that you've understood something when you flyby-eyeball it.

Comment author: orthonormal 14 October 2011 10:17:27PM 0 points [-]

Hmm. On the one hand, I'd get pretty impatient with that really quickly, especially given how many words I use that wouldn't be in its dictionary. On the other hand, if it inspires me to err on the side of terse and simple English, that might be a good thing.

It does give me another good idea, though: I can print out a paper copy. With my academic papers, at least, I notice all sorts of things in print that I gloss over when it's on a screen.