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somervta comments on A My Little Pony fanfic allegedly but not mainly about immortality - Less Wrong Discussion

9 Post author: PhilGoetz 10 September 2012 01:02AM

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Comment author: somervta 02 October 2012 12:44:36PM 1 point [-]

I have to agree with Eliezer here - stunningly good. I suspect that the problem you are facing is quite simple - at the end, Celestia dies. At the end, she did reject immortality, so readers interpreted that she was making a decision to rid herself of the 'curse' of immortality.