Seeking comments
I'm trying a writing experiment, and want to design as much of a story as possible before starting writing it. I want to make sure I'm not forgetting any obvious details, or leaving out important ideas, so I'd appreciate any comments you can add to my draft design document at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XcgNwELHCU-r7GuYUgDNDDIviThd8Y7Bdto_kMIcmlI/edit . Thank you for your help.
I've briefly looked it up and it's interesting. You've obviously focused a lot on world-building, so kudos to that.
What I'm not seeing is an interesting developement: there are many directions the plot could go, but you need to choose one and explore that.
I don't know much about the literary trope of the last man on Earth, but it's interesting that the protagonist might not be the last man, but the last sane man, akin to "I am legend".
Will there be any kind of conflict? How do you plan the story to end?
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