You went to some ends to make the list comprehensive. I have only a few comments:
_5. Lack of knowledge in logic, statistic, brain science, scientific method etc.
I don't think this strictly meets your requirement that it doesn't "allow a person to see and cure his other biases". Sure science helps but I think that many laymen already to profit from bias literature otherwise self-help books - some of which picking up biases wouldn't work. Or don't they? Maybe the point really is that the required preliminaries are so many or organized in such a way that you can't go there from here.
_9. Lack of motivation
This is relatively broad. It can be seen to include 4, 5 and 10.
I also tried to come up with other options which was hard. Here is my try:
_11. Greed (or other highly focusing motivations like existential needs). Takes energy away from self improvement. This appears to be a special case of your 9 which I see as too general.
_12. Social pressure. Thinking about own fallacies may not be socially acceptable in the peer group. This is different from 2 -Dogmatism.
Maybe this list could be structured a bit into psychological, cognitive and belief structure items.
Minor nitpick: The formatting of the numbered list seems to be broken.
Thanks for your suggestions and nitpick.
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