Actually I will be dropping the third chapter six days from now, because this website doesn't let people with less than -2 karma post more than once a week and these stories haven't been received very well. 

Sorry :(

Sorry that's my mistake. The erotica was written by a human being (I should have clarified), so it's horrible for no particular reason. 

But I'm very glad you're enjoying it! I'll try to release the third chapter sometime tomorrow.