Morendil comments on Mental Crystallography - Less Wrong

13 Post author: Alicorn 27 February 2010 01:04AM

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Comment author: Morendil 27 February 2010 08:56:10AM 1 point [-]

Suggestion: replace the linked "this" in the final paragraph with a very short expansion, so that clicking the link is optional. E.g. "you can wind up with a frustrating result".

If your writing flows, don't break the flow. If your writing doesn't flow, rewrite. ;)

Comment author: Alicorn 27 February 2010 05:01:20PM 1 point [-]

Replaced, thanks.