I think if you fully taboo the concepts of "personal identity" and "existence", the argument evaporates. Before tabooing, your argument looks like this:
On the face of it, it seems sound. But after tabooing, we're left with something like:
Edit: My #4 and #5 were nonsense.
I either don't understand your re-write or don't understand how it dissolves the argument.
If it's worth saying, but not worth its own post, even in Discussion, it goes here.