I think Eliezer has written passionately and pointedly about rationality, will to become stronger and need for FAI. Writing this story makes a separate point about those ideas.
After reading this story I feel myself agreeing with Eliezer more on his views and that seems to be a sign of manipulation and not of a rationality.
Philosophy expressed in form of fiction seems to have a very strong effect on people - even if the fiction isn't very good (ref. Ayn Rand). I find this story well written and engaging. I'm having other people read and comment story without background of reading Eliezers writings before to have better idea if this story actually has made a point instead of creating stronger attachment to ideas presented earlier.
Few comments in no particular order (randomized):
Format of the story being released in small bite sized installments creates an artificial scarcity.
The story compactly addresses matters that readers have spend time studying here which is very rewarding.
Engaging people in the creation of the story creates attachment to it.
Characters use very familiar phrases that help formation of in-group feeling.
No matter which of the three alien species one happens to cheer for in the story that is still cheering for someone.
Umm... 'Superstimulus'.
I think Eliezer has written passionately and pointedly about rationality, will to become stronger and need for FAI. Writing this story makes a separate point about those ideas.
After reading this story I feel myself agreeing with Eliezer more on his views and that seems to be a sign of manipulation and not of a rationality.
Philosophy expressed in form of fiction seems to have a very strong effect on people - even if the fiction isn't very good (ref. Ayn Rand). I find this story well written and engaging. I'm having other people read and comment story without background of reading Eliezers writings before to have better idea if this story actually has made a point instead of creating stronger attachment to ideas presented earlier.
Few comments in no particular order (randomized):
Format of the story being released in small bite sized installments creates an artificial scarcity.
The story compactly addresses matters that readers have spend time studying here which is very rewarding.
Engaging people in the creation of the story creates attachment to it.
Characters use very familiar phrases that help formation of in-group feeling.
No matter which of the three alien species one happens to cheer for in the story that is still cheering for someone.