The story seems to be unfolding pretty much the same, no matter the AI personality.
The human is a bit far away, a bit abstract, which leads to low emotional involvement. Maybe the human could have a name and a distinct personality that's generated? Or you could prompt the user for their name and the AI will refer to the human by that name.
In a similar vain: Somehow the AI seems to be a bit of an unreliable narrator. It will talk about restricting the freedom of the human to increase their safety, but it will frame it in a way that it's the good and necessary... (read more)
Love the idea! Some things I noticed:
The story seems to be unfolding pretty much the same, no matter the AI personality.
The human is a bit far away, a bit abstract, which leads to low emotional involvement. Maybe the human could have a name and a distinct personality that's generated? Or you could prompt the user for their name and the AI will refer to the human by that name.
In a similar vain: Somehow the AI seems to be a bit of an unreliable narrator. It will talk about restricting the freedom of the human to increase their safety, but it will frame it in a way that it's the good and necessary... (read more)