"The train might not pause or even decelerate at Humanville Station. It is likely to swoosh right by." (p4)
There isn't much justification for this claim near where it's made. I could imagine it causing a reader to think that the author is prone to believing important things without much evidence -- or that he expects his readers to do so.
(It might help if the author noted that the topic is discussed in Chapter 4)
"The train might not pause or even decelerate at Humanville Station. It is likely to swoosh right by." (p4)
There isn't much justification for this claim near where it's made. I could imagine it causing a reader to think that the author is prone to believing important things without much evidence -- or that he expects his readers to do so.
(It might help if the author noted that the topic is discussed in Chapter 4)