jmmcd comments on Is an Intelligence Explosion a Disjunctive or Conjunctive Event? - Less Wrong

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Comment author: jmmcd 15 November 2011 06:30:13PM 1 point [-]

I didn't find your style to be difficult to read. The quoted sentence is fine and in no way fancy. I review and write academic papers all the time so I know bad prose when I see it.