Nisan comments on Open Thread, June 16-30, 2013 - Less Wrong

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Comment author: Nisan 18 June 2013 07:37:29PM 3 points [-]

A good piece of advice lukeprog gave me is to structure your story around an emotional arc. E.g. a story about an awesome show you went to is also a story about what you felt before, during, and after the show. A story about the life-cycle of a psychoactive parasite is also a story about a conflict between the clever parasite and the tragic host; or a story about your feelings of fascination and horror when you first learned about the parasite.