I just skimmed your downvoted post and linked doc. (I agree that there was no way I would have clicked through to the doc outside the context of this question.)
The post read like a big series of platitudes, or applause lights. The claims were too generic to be interesting to me. I agree with some, I don't agree with others, but either way it wasn't giving me anything I couldn't generate myself.
The linked doc actually started out strong. You say that you have personally experienced how your own behavior and thinking change when you are materially deprived, and that you actually tested different kinds of deprivations and rewards on yourself over time, and observed patterns. That's very interesting! I don't know anything about that. I want to hear what you experienced and think about whether it has anything to do with my life and what I can see. I would upvote a post about that.
I think you're writing these things to try to pitch your project, but people on LW mostly aren't sitting around wanting to get pitched on projects. They want to read intellectually stimulating new ideas. And it's not a convincing pitch either unless you show people you have the goods.
Thank you for this comment. I view writing through a marketing context, but I didn't realize that the people on Lesswrong are this motivated by intellectual stimulation/learning. In retrospect it seems obvious, but nonetheless I'm glad to have learned from my mistakes. I'll prioritize using curiosity & supplying new information from now on with more concise references to contexts/background information from now on. And I'll avoid the kind of emotionally targeted tone/structure that I used in my first post.
From glancing at your profile it seems like you're not actually being downvoted that much, except for the first post which is at -13. I didn't downvote it but I found the post not especially well written, and rather light on details. It felt like a politician's speech and I was hoping for more concrete proposals? (tbf I didn't read the linked doc).
Thanks for the advice. I want to learn how to make better posts in the future so I'll try to figure out how to improve.
Should I not have began by talking about background information & explaining my beliefs?
- Should I have the audience had contextual awareness and gone right into talking about solutions?
Or was the problem more along the lines of writing quality, tone, or style?
- What type of post do you like reading?
- Would it be alright if I asked for an example so that I could read it?
Also you're right. Looking back that...
I only see one downvoted post, and a bunch of comments and a few posts with very low voting at all. That seems pretty normal to me, and the advice of "lurk for quite a bit, and comment occasionally" is usually good for any new users on any site.
While this is true, I applaud Oxidize for learning the fast way. Most users of this site do only the "lurk for quite a bit", and never attempt to write great top-level posts. Ultimately, there is no harm done by crashing and burning a few times—as long as you're nice about it (which Oxidize has been).
I was first introduced to Lesswrong about 6 months ago, and started posting about 4 months ago, but my posts and comments have been downvoted which has caused me to become unable interact with this community. What am I not understanding? The posts I make just get downvoted and there's no feedback so I don't know how to improve. I read recommended guides for beginners, and I've been open-minded with all my posts & comments. I think maybe I have a fundamental misunderstanding of the people who comprise the Lesswrong community. Their goals, their knowledge, their intentions, etc. I understand that a lot of people in this community come from academia and I do not, so maybe that's part of the reason? Or maybe there is a set of norms I'm unaware of because I'm new? I'm guessing almost no one will be able to see this, but if you do, can you enlighten me about what I'm not seeing?